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The Ubiquity of Perception

Clarity comes well born to dawn With an undying, insatiable rage, Gone are the times when love was ours That permitted a wit to gauge Free men once said that time based lies Do marketh and strengthen our faults, But now, we are, as ever before, the race that designed the vaults Not now Not past Nor never still; a back to laden the burden The rock that stands erect Shall be the one that acts as Verdun Because, all this, will never be, disposed of tranquillity, The Fall of Rome, the fall of man Shall waddle in the sea.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/3/2016 8:34:00 AM

Congrats on your win in Linda's contest.;0)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/2/2016 11:53:00 PM

Jonathon Durno, Congratulations on your Desperate House Wife WIN. I thank you for writing for my contest. Stop by my latest blog "UNION OF DISGUISING FACES "HZ1" blog #2." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/30/2016 2:54:00 PM

Congrats Jonathon, for your WIN in the contest!! ; -)

Tom Quigley

Date: 6/26/2016 8:56:00 AM

Congrats on your HM in my contest and thanks for entering!

Jonathon Doodle
Date: 6/27/2016 9:00:00 AM

Thank you. It's not a problem :D

Brian Davey

Date: 6/21/2016 6:22:00 PM

Congrats on your placement in my contest and creating a little chaos with me!

Jonathon Doodle
Date: 6/22/2016 8:44:00 AM

It is onoy my pleasure! Haha

Skat A

Date: 6/4/2016 12:26:00 AM

Jonathon, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Jonathon Doodle
Date: 6/27/2016 8:58:00 AM

Thank you. Very welcoming :'D. I surely will

Jonathon Doodle
Date: 6/27/2016 8:56:00 AM

Thank you. Very welcoming :'D. I surely will

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/2/2016 10:36:00 PM

Love the bricks, and bricks of perception... Jonathan :), Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jonathon Doodle
Date: 6/3/2016 8:33:00 AM

Thank you for commenting! Please feel free to give constructive critisicm; I need it! I really have no background in poetry whatsoever but I decided to try to write one day, and I loved it.