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The Two Twiddle Dees Part 2

My brothers and sisters, the twiddle dee, Can very well be, you and me, If within, our minds we stray And don’t find our narrow way! The old man of the mind, Can never find, Love’s kind, It’s not of his mind! Jesus said lose the old self, Un till nothing is left, To lose the old kind, is to find, Love’s kind! The soul sprang forth, From a sacred birth, Not of this earth, The earth has no worth, To give in exchange, A means, to rearrange, A mind, that’s deranged, And needs change! The two twiddle dees, Chose their own tree, By what they could see, They thought they could be knowledge, Of their own college! Love the real college, Of life knowledge, Was bound to present, And to the mind, a choice was sent, So that love, could rejoice, With another love’s choice! Do you now understand Boyce, How it was that love gave a choice, To the mind of Boyce, So that love could rejoice, With love which is Boyce! Love, the power that made the vessel, Went through a hassle, For his chosen vessel, To give a choice, To love, the real Boyce! Without love and it’s vessel, no two for choice, Love and love’s vessel, which is Boyce, So let us greatly rejoice, About Love’s choice!! 1-7-09

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/11/2010 1:36:00 PM
Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week John >> James
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Date: 1/11/2010 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week John. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2010 1:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your feature of the week, John and thank you for once again sharing your poetic talent. Love, lainie
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Date: 1/11/2010 12:06:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week John.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/10/2010 4:10:00 PM
Hi John,Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/10/2010 1:05:00 PM
More inspiration from your pen, dear John. Congratulations on your featured poem! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/10/2010 12:16:00 PM
John - Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 7/21/2009 12:00:00 PM
For a second I thought the flow might sputter. Transitioning from "another love's choice, and understanding Boyce." I was wrong................ ........Flawlessly Executed...............:JP)
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Date: 6/18/2009 4:18:00 PM
John, I see you have a constant style. I was a little confused in this part, though. The rhyme is good. But I'm totally ignorant of the meaning of Boyce.... other than a very small town in Lousiana. Keep writing. Soup mail me if Boyce has another meaning as used in this write. Take care and keep writing.
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Date: 6/18/2009 3:25:00 PM
Like the way you relate love to knowledge in this one, John. In schools the nuns taught us that hate and prejudice were based on ignorance, so this concept is right on target. Love, Carolyn
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