The Two Second Surf

Susie was tired of ironing one day
Wanted to use her board in a fun way
Jumped on top, like a surf board,
it crashed to the floor, oh lord!
Now she's stuck on the board in the doorway



7/17/22

Contest: Limerick Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Lisa YY
(edited 7/18/22)
Syllable counts: 10 10 7 7 10 - Used Howmanysyllables.com
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Rose  Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 2:27 PM
love your sense of humor, give her water poor baby lol, thanks for the smiles Tania
Kitchin Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 4:25 AM
Thank you!
Calasibetta Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 8:28 AM
LOL…wonderful limerick~the image hysterical. :)Paulette
Kitchin Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 8:40 AM
Paulette, thank you!
Horsman Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 11:04 PM
A winner here, Tania, and deservingly so. Love it.
Kitchin Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 3:56 AM
Harry, thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 10:31 AM
Love it. Her picture made for a lot of cute limericks. Congrats on your win
Kitchin Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:45 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Alex Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 6:55 AM
Stuck. Very interesting. Congratulations!
Kitchin Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 4:20 PM
Thank you!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 12:50 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a  fun write. Don't you just hate being stuck in the doorway when you are trying to catch that wave. Have a fun/ blessed day.................
Kitchin Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 4:20 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Flood Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 6:32 AM
Well, it was never gonna end well, Tania. Congrats. Terry
Kitchin Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 4:20 PM
Thank you, Terry!
Logan Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 12:37 PM
At least the hot iron didn't fall on top of her. Love this one, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 3:48 AM
Thank you, Jenna!
Horne Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 12:04 PM
LOL, had a good laugh at this! I know I'm late, but thanks for the wins in your contests
Kitchin Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 3:49 AM
Thank you and you're welcome, Jack!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 1:09 AM
Great humor. I can almost picture her. Best for a win.
Kitchin Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 3:25 AM
Thank you, Victor! hugs
Cunningham Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 2:27 PM
Lol, they're certainly a danger to themselves. Good luck in the contest, hope you are keeping well Tania Tom
Kitchin Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 4:53 PM
Tom, thank you and yes, I am doing well, I hope all is well with you!
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