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The Two Second Surf

Susie was tired of ironing one day Wanted to use her board in a fun way Jumped on top, like a surf board, it crashed to the floor, oh lord! Now she's stuck on the board in the doorway 7/17/22 Contest: Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsor: Lisa YY (edited 7/18/22) Syllable counts: 10 10 7 7 10 - Used Howmanysyllables.com

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/6/2022 2:27:00 PM

love your sense of humor, give her water poor baby lol, thanks for the smiles Tania

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/7/2022 4:25:00 AM

Thank you!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 7/31/2022 8:28:00 AM

LOL…wonderful limerick~the image hysterical. :)Paulette

Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/31/2022 8:40:00 AM

Paulette, thank you!

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/27/2022 11:04:00 PM

A winner here, Tania, and deservingly so. Love it.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/28/2022 3:56:00 AM

Harry, thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/21/2022 10:31:00 AM

Love it. Her picture made for a lot of cute limericks. Congrats on your win

Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/22/2022 3:45:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/20/2022 6:55:00 AM

Stuck. Very interesting. Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/20/2022 4:20:00 PM

Thank you!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/19/2022 12:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. Don't you just hate being stuck in the doorway when you are trying to catch that wave. Have a fun/ blessed day.................

Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/19/2022 4:20:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!