Notes About The Poem

the two of us

karmic attraction veers 
toward the inevitable and 
the unavoidable rolls out 
as it was always meant to be

like magnets exerting their pull
collide becoming inseparable
call it fate or call it destiny
too late to change the outcome

no deciding factor 
comes into play
it just is...
inevitable and predestined

the dice cast
the cards dealt
so we wait to see
how the script plays out



AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Crandall Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 9:35 PM
A well-expressed poem about fate. I especially like the last four lines.
Gauthier Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 4:19 PM
Thank you very much, David ~
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