The Two Foods

Health Food natural, low-calorie nourishing, strengthening, boring kale, *kimchi, chips, chocolate tantalizing, satisfying, fattening salty, sweet Junk Food *Kimchi is the national health food of Korea, fermented vegetables, particularly cabbage. It's nasty-tasting stuff, but to each his own. For the Diamante Poem Contest of Caren Krutsinger
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Brul Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 9:54 PM
So lovely and unique! Congratulations!
Gasun Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 1:11 AM
So lovely and helpful diamante poem my dear poet friend. I like it. Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings always. Hugs
Fowler Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Cute Andrea. I lean toward the healthy but sure like to indulge on occasion. ;) Congratulations on your win! :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 10:25 PM
Coming back to congratulate you on your awesome first place win, Andrea! (I actually like kale especially kale chips) you're right, to each his own! Hugs, Rhonda
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 8:20 PM
Yeah kale chips aren't bad but they can't hold a candle to real chips!!
Kendrick Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 6:55 AM
I see your name is on the winner's list..Let me salute you and enjoy the bliss..Congrats..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 10:18 AM
deliciously worded, andie.. i love kimchi too... bestest congrats on your win!
Kayode Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 10:08 AM
I knew this would do well and I am happy it does; congrats Andrea...huggs
Poteet Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 8:55 AM
cute, Angela, touching the heart of this chocolate lover...Congratulations.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 1:53 AM
Lol you are making me crave some junk food Andrea. I do have a chicken tamale that may suffice.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 1:54 AM
Forgot to give you congrats on your wonderful win my friend!
Yvonne Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 12:51 PM
WOW, Andrea the very top of the list. Congratulations on your first place win.
Haight Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Hi Andrea, congratulations on your win. Such an imaginative comparison! So hard to make these food choices!! Sandra
Goswami Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations! Very nice diamante. Junk food is dangerous for health. Very good social work...
Gasun Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 7:36 AM
My hearty congratulations on your top win and on this excellent diamante poem of yours my dearest friend, Andrea! Thank you so much for sharing! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora - sm reply pls. ty
Andresen Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 11:50 PM
- A really wonderful diamond, Andrea !!! Congratulations! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Peterson Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 10:34 PM
A day will come that I eat my last chocolate. I had deadly, flaky biscuits tonight. If such things cause my death, it will all have been worthwhile. Sure wish I could sleep on my stomach again, but the back won't allow. Thanks for the brief walk down this lane.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 4:18 PM
Haha, love it Andrea. I also love kale. Congratulations on your first place win.
Callus Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 4:16 PM
Congratulations Andrea! Another merited top placing! There's cholesterol in the equation, too!
Walker  Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 3:55 PM
Congratulations on your first place win Andrea... Verlena
Allison Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 2:51 PM
dropping back with my congrats on hitting the top spot:-) Hugs jan xx
Mcintosh Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 2:22 PM
I love junk food, but I love kimchi, too. It's awesome. Wonderful poem. Congratulations.. and God bless you,.
Sirak Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 6:29 AM
I'll take the junk foods. What is bad for us is always more appealing.
Walker Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 7:35 AM
I agree, most health food is boring and that junk food is so much more appealing to me. Well written to the point poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 10:40 PM
Chocolate and chips are both weaknesses for me. I enjoyed your poem.
Carroll Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 11:30 PM
Creative culinary write Andrea!
Hicks Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 11:29 PM
I'm a lover of all foods myself - grilled asparagus and a can of V8 juice seems just as appealing as a grease burger with some french fries. But that's just me! Kimchi, however - I'm not sure about that stuff. I tried it and couldn't take it... my opinion on it might change if I had it WITH something, instead of by itself.
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