The Twisting Mind

The Twisted Mind It behoves you well to delve in the twists and turns of my mind As my thoughts undulate through the passages before the truth you find Do the Tarantula March and dance well through the space Where processing thoughts and words mingle, dancing with such grace… Each twist, each turn, each thought kicked high, and then cleaved down low Thrown and tossed out, chopped and diced, then a new thought does grow My mind is dark, then light as can be, loving and warm but searching to be free. Free from what my mind tied screams, yet I know I have heard the decree… So pick your dance and partner well, as you skip through my mind in a twirl The conglomeration of thoughts and brainstorms you may just unfurl Tread carefully all those that want to know what lurks inside You never just know the Devil, may have just taken a new bride… ©~GG~ 5/10/2102

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/17/2012 10:03:00 AM

Enjoyed your take on the twisted mind here, Mandy! twisted mind but that also what makes it so intriguing! Just dropping by as well to say hi! :)

Jack Horne

Date: 10/7/2012 12:21:00 PM

lol, so very true, Mandy - and I loved the last line : )

Terry O'Leary

Date: 10/6/2012 11:07:00 AM

Great imagery... nicely woven... Terry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2012 9:24:00 PM

Mandy, your poem, is awesome. the mind is as twisted as can be, enjoyed stopping by;-) Good night~ LINDA

David Williams

Date: 10/5/2012 1:30:00 PM

Mandy, love the twists and turns in this, they should do this on strictly come dancing, enjoy your hols and have a peaceful weekend..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2012 1:11:00 PM

and don't worry if you are busy. I can't believe I am keeping up spending less time here than ever before.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2012 1:10:00 PM

VERY enjoyable this is. Is it for Drunken Pen contest?? It just seems to flow with your thoughts. I LOVE your conclusion on this one.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 10/5/2012 1:26:00 PM

never thought about that but I may do now you have bought it to mind xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2012 7:11:00 AM

Like the twist at the end..Enjoyed reading your creative lines this morn..Thanks for stopping by..I hope that you have a great time on your trip..Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/5/2012 5:06:00 AM

wow, is this shakespeare or poe? in your mind, this is seriuos poetry Mandy... really love this to bits...will read this again and again.....

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 10/5/2012 5:12:00 AM

I always hold a little back to be released now and then, I may not be as simple as one thinks ha ha xx