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The Twinkling

above
the hazy moon
night time whispers stories
shooting stars race in close to hear
and wink

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Christuraj Alex

March 25, 2022 at 9:27 PM

"night time whispers stories" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 14, 2010 at 5:43 AM

I like the whimsical feel of this cinquain. James MG., Very nice. Smiles, Dane Ann

Craig Hammond

January 4, 2010 at 1:56 PM

Very nice Jimmy! Tonia and I enjoyed it.

James Fraser

December 15, 2009 at 2:14 PM

What a sky to behold and view in your superb poem James >>

John Freeman

December 13, 2009 at 6:54 PM

Awesomely cool Cinquain, james, Sincerely, Moses

Robert A. Dufresne

December 12, 2009 at 10:43 AM

This a really cool inspiring cinquain, James! Got alot of respect for this one. -Robert

Daver Austin

December 12, 2009 at 7:31 AM

Oh, so charming. Great short write. Love, daver

Marty Owens

December 9, 2009 at 7:35 PM

Very nice...enjoyed..Marty

Debbie Guzzi

December 9, 2009 at 5:18 PM

Wowser #1 on the top hundred..you must be struttin' Light & Love

James Peranteau

December 8, 2009 at 11:04 AM

This poetry Sir is remarkable to the burst of energy one has when trying to explane nature to a loved captive audiance !! Love this write !!!!! james into mine favs with this !

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

December 8, 2009 at 6:55 AM

This poem sparkles like the stars. Very nice. (soupmail) Love to you, James, Dane Ann

Sue Mason

December 8, 2009 at 6:35 AM

Wish this one went on and on and on ... smile ... how beautiful and definitely the beginning of a children's story ... smile ... Hope you have a wonderful holiday James and 2010 is a blessed year for your and yours!!

Mary Meade Stephenson

December 8, 2009 at 4:18 AM

Beautiful imagery you have painted with words here. The night sky is so awesome! Thanks so much for sharing and for your kind comments~Mary

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 7, 2009 at 6:00 PM

Beautiful cinquain Jimbo with great words flowing .. wait... I just thought I saw a star wink at me... great line... enjoyed... blessings. .. luv ... thankxxx for enjoying and reading my poetry too... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart" Poetry Soup