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The Twinkling

The Twinkling above the hazy moon night time whispers stories shooting stars race in close to hear and wink

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/14/2010 5:43:00 AM
I like the whimsical feel of this cinquain. James MG., Very nice. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/4/2010 1:56:00 PM
Very nice Jimmy! Tonia and I enjoyed it.
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Date: 12/15/2009 2:14:00 PM
What a sky to behold and view in your superb poem James >>
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Date: 12/13/2009 6:54:00 PM
Awesomely cool Cinquain, james, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 12/12/2009 10:43:00 AM
This a really cool inspiring cinquain, James! Got alot of respect for this one. -Robert
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Date: 12/12/2009 7:31:00 AM
Oh, so charming. Great short write. Love, daver
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Date: 12/9/2009 7:35:00 PM
Very nice...enjoyed..Marty
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Date: 12/9/2009 5:18:00 PM
Wowser #1 on the top hundred..you must be struttin' Light & Love
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Date: 12/8/2009 11:04:00 AM
This poetry Sir is remarkable to the burst of energy one has when trying to explane nature to a loved captive audiance !! Love this write !!!!! james into mine favs with this !
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Date: 12/8/2009 6:55:00 AM
This poem sparkles like the stars. Very nice. (soupmail) Love to you, James, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/8/2009 6:35:00 AM
Wish this one went on and on and on ... smile ... how beautiful and definitely the beginning of a children's story ... smile ... Hope you have a wonderful holiday James and 2010 is a blessed year for your and yours!!
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Date: 12/8/2009 4:18:00 AM
Beautiful imagery you have painted with words here. The night sky is so awesome! Thanks so much for sharing and for your kind comments~Mary
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Date: 12/7/2009 6:00:00 PM
Beautiful cinquain Jimbo with great words flowing .. wait... I just thought I saw a star wink at me... great line... enjoyed... blessings. .. luv ... thankxxx for enjoying and reading my poetry too... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart" Poetry Soup
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Date: 12/7/2009 4:56:00 PM
So pretty and sweet! This is a beaut, jimbo :-)
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Date: 12/7/2009 10:09:00 AM
Unique and witty James, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 12/7/2009 5:40:00 AM
nice imagery, cool poem
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Date: 12/6/2009 10:18:00 PM
What a beauty,im in love with those shooting stars,Can i make a wish?awesome indeedmafavourite--Charma
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Date: 12/6/2009 8:56:00 PM
How nice! What a thought and a great image. I am inspired. I am goign to try write one of those too. Thanks for sharing, Jim! Caroline.
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Date: 12/6/2009 8:19:00 PM
A beautiful Cinquain! Going into my favorites! Love Light Patricia
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