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The twilight of the morning

The holes of the lace curtain, Having closed the winter windows. Life shimmers like so coveted blueberries. So many pieces of obscurity. The tops of the trees are spinning in the wind, In a semicircle, back and forth, Like whipping up the raw material for a biscuit. Or maybe they're wringing their necks? The wind has thrown the rumble of trains Into a soundproof bag. Every human is asleep.

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Date: 1/6/2025 5:29:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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Date: 9/18/2024 5:35:00 AM
Never connected trees with biscuits before but hey, poetic license applies. Have a great day Mari
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Mari Bond
Date: 9/18/2024 5:44:00 AM
Thanks Tom.

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