Greg Hoffman Poet Cinquain

The Tunnel-Visual 1

Doubt hangs
On shadows still
Despair lingers on leaves
Beyond the path is sanity
Waiting


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Contest-All American Beauty
Prompt-Visual 1
Date-1/11/2015
Sponsor-Andrea Dietrich


Contest: 15
Sponsored by: Casarah Nance

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Skat A October 31, 2015 at 12:23 AM :) congrats on this poem once again. SKAT

Viv Wigley October 28, 2015 at 12:29 AM Congrats on your win, Greg. Regards, Viv

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 28, 2015 at 12:05 AM Congrats on superb win Greg with this amazing write!

Skat A February 1, 2015 at 2:32 PM GREG, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

Barbara Gorelick January 28, 2015 at 11:14 AM Amazing how we all see something just a bit different...Congrats..the last line is perfect. BG

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 28, 2015 at 10:10 AM So much conveyed in so few words...an amazing write, Greg. Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick January 26, 2015 at 12:40 PM !!! : > )...Way to go..Sara

Arlene Smith January 25, 2015 at 7:27 PM Outstanding, my friend!! Congrats on a great win!... Hugs, Arlene

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2015 at 3:36 PM that middle line for me was outstanding. I didn't see the picture as being melancholy, so I enjoyed your fresh take on the picture. Marvelous poem. congrats in my contest. Greg Hoffman January 25, 2015 at 6:26 PM Thank you very much and thanks for having this contest.It was fun to write a poem again

Paul Callus January 25, 2015 at 2:41 PM Powerfully expressed, Greg! So befitting the visual you chose! Congratulations! #7 paul

Rob Carmack January 25, 2015 at 2:24 PM I like the depth of this one. Congrats.

Jan Allison January 25, 2015 at 1:40 PM Beautiful write Greg many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos January 11, 2015 at 6:23 PM Powerful, brilliant piece! Excellent write, Greg! Pandita