Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Free verse

The Tune of My Heart

Beyond prevailing heart songs
I yielded to fashion a tune of wonder
pulses and beats that do not belong.
I pondered over and over
decoding layers of mystery
a speck of awe within is reached.
I roved about along the fields
expanding beauty nurturing my touch
a rush of melodious breeze flooded my fancy.
Deep into a distinct essence 
gorgeous voices started resonating
one secret is leaked!
Hills and mountains carved my air
what a flair!
I drifted out to the lake
lost for words in my world
I reached for a sip
an aura of magic wrapped my core
brimful, but wanted more.
Wide my heart
I leafed through abundance of scenic allure
Supreme fascination beheld!
A puff of relish is breathed
my tune of wonder is conceived!
 
June 23rd, 2018

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Lawrence Sharp August 18, 2018 at 3:37 AM Very artfully written, an excellent piece. Besma Riabi Dziri August 22, 2018 at 11:31 AM My pleasure! Thank you so much for your generous and praising feedback! Humbled and elated. Be blessed.

Robert Lindley July 2, 2018 at 2:29 PM So wondrously conceived and executed presentation of Nature, Beauty and infinite possibilities in life, love and human existence!! A fav... a most inspiring free verse!! Besma Riabi Dziri July 3, 2018 at 4:37 AM Again I can't thank you enough for the precious time, effort and thought you granted me today! A reward I always treasure! My best regards Robert. Keep shining and stay blessed always.

Eve Roper June 26, 2018 at 6:59 PM Beautiful imagery and meaning ... Hugs Eve Besma Riabi Dziri June 27, 2018 at 8:01 AM Elated by your visit dear Eve.. thank you so much for your lovely and uplifting feedback. Stay blessed.

Silent One June 25, 2018 at 2:07 PM Ever heart has a tune.. This is so beautiful, I love this poetic prose poetry.. so many great lines.. Besma Riabi Dziri June 26, 2018 at 11:48 AM Good to greet you on my page Silent One! A great delight to read your praising feedback! A reward coming from a poet of grandeur I tremendously treasure! Thank you so much and stay blessed.

Ravi Sathasivam June 25, 2018 at 8:54 AM Excellent. Beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Besma Riabi Dziri June 25, 2018 at 10:58 AM I'm honoured by your visit and rewarding comment! Thank you so much, deeply humbled.. Stay blessed.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 25, 2018 at 7:09 AM My heart is filled with wonder because of your masterful poetic ability which embraces the beauty of nature and caresses the senses dear, Besma ! A masterpiece ! Besma Riabi Dziri June 25, 2018 at 10:49 AM Dear Demetrios so generous of you to praise my humble write in such elating and uplifting comment! It is an honour and a tremendous delight to have you on the path of poetry rejoicing the passion of inking beauty.. Thank you so much for your precious visit and feedback. Stay safe and blessed always.

Faraz Ajmal June 24, 2018 at 10:23 AM Such a beautiful poem this is, full of imagery and certainly a joy to read, good luck Besma Riabi Dziri June 25, 2018 at 10:53 AM Thank you so much Faraz for your appreciative feedback! I'm happy you enjoyed my write.. Deeply humbled and pleased! Stay safe and blessed.

Lyric Man June 23, 2018 at 11:20 PM Nice write! Besma Riabi Dziri June 24, 2018 at 7:44 AM Thank you so much Lyric Man! I do appreciate your visit and lovely feedback. Stay safe.

Vijay Pandit June 23, 2018 at 5:50 PM Beautiful poetry..roaming in wonders of nature..pondering in words so precious..elegantly depicted..great write, Besma. Besma Riabi Dziri June 24, 2018 at 7:47 AM My immense pleasure and a precious reward having a heartfelt and an uplifting feedback! Thank you so much dear Vijay for your generous visit. Shine and stay blessed always.