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The Tune of My Heart

Beyond prevailing heart songs I yielded to fashion a tune of wonder pulses and beats that do not belong. I pondered over and over decoding layers of mystery a speck of awe within is reached. I roved about along the fields expanding beauty nurturing my touch a rush of melodious breeze flooded my fancy. Deep into a distinct essence gorgeous voices started resonating one secret is leaked! Hills and mountains carved my air what a flair! I drifted out to the lake lost for words in my world I reached for a sip an aura of magic wrapped my core brimful, but wanted more. Wide my heart I leafed through abundance of scenic allure Supreme fascination beheld! A puff of relish is breathed my tune of wonder is conceived! June 23rd, 2018

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Lawrence Sharp

Date: 8/18/2018 3:37:00 AM

Very artfully written, an excellent piece.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/22/2018 11:31:00 AM

My pleasure! Thank you so much for your generous and praising feedback! Humbled and elated. Be blessed.

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/2/2018 2:29:00 PM

So wondrously conceived and executed presentation of Nature, Beauty and infinite possibilities in life, love and human existence!! A fav... a most inspiring free verse!!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 7/3/2018 4:37:00 AM

Again I can't thank you enough for the precious time, effort and thought you granted me today! A reward I always treasure! My best regards Robert. Keep shining and stay blessed always.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/26/2018 6:59:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and meaning ... Hugs Eve

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/27/2018 8:01:00 AM

Elated by your visit dear Eve.. thank you so much for your lovely and uplifting feedback. Stay blessed.

Silent One

Date: 6/25/2018 2:07:00 PM

Ever heart has a tune.. This is so beautiful, I love this poetic prose poetry.. so many great lines..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/26/2018 11:48:00 AM

Good to greet you on my page Silent One! A great delight to read your praising feedback! A reward coming from a poet of grandeur I tremendously treasure! Thank you so much and stay blessed.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/25/2018 8:54:00 AM

Excellent. Beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/25/2018 10:58:00 AM

I'm honoured by your visit and rewarding comment! Thank you so much, deeply humbled.. Stay blessed.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/25/2018 7:09:00 AM

My heart is filled with wonder because of your masterful poetic ability which embraces the beauty of nature and caresses the senses dear, Besma ! A masterpiece !

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/25/2018 10:49:00 AM

Dear Demetrios so generous of you to praise my humble write in such elating and uplifting comment! It is an honour and a tremendous delight to have you on the path of poetry rejoicing the passion of inking beauty.. Thank you so much for your precious visit and feedback. Stay safe and blessed always.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/24/2018 10:23:00 AM

Such a beautiful poem this is, full of imagery and certainly a joy to read, good luck

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/25/2018 10:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Faraz for your appreciative feedback! I'm happy you enjoyed my write.. Deeply humbled and pleased! Stay safe and blessed.

Lyric Man

Date: 6/23/2018 11:20:00 PM

Nice write!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/24/2018 7:44:00 AM

Thank you so much Lyric Man! I do appreciate your visit and lovely feedback. Stay safe.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/23/2018 5:50:00 PM

Beautiful poetry..roaming in wonders of nature..pondering in words so precious..elegantly depicted..great write, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/24/2018 7:47:00 AM

My immense pleasure and a precious reward having a heartfelt and an uplifting feedback! Thank you so much dear Vijay for your generous visit. Shine and stay blessed always.