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10/11/2024

Poem of the Day — Sunday, October 13, 2024

Image by Mark Toney using DALL-E (2024-10-26)

Thanks to fellow poet Jan Allison for permitting me to use the phrase "AI AI No!" from her brilliant and clever poem, "A I Poems on Poetry Soup."
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/_a_i_poems_on_poetry_soup__1677624

The Rolex "Cyclops" is the magnifying lens that adorns the crystal over the date display. (A few models don't have it.) It bulges outward in a convex shape, so as you run your finger over the lens, you should feel the `Cyclops bump.'

The 4Cs are the accepted standards for assessing a diamond's quality: Color, Clarity, Cut, and Carat weight. Cubic Zirconia (CZ) is a man-made gemstone that looks similar to a diamond but is less expensive.

Brand new Rolex watch! A gift from her best friend One day it just stops working so she has to take it in Watchmaker says, "Not worth it, the flat Cyclops proves it's fake" This news is so upsetting She cries out, "For goodness' sake!" Fighting first-date jitters her boyfriend reads a poem Adds, "You inspire me to write," Assures, "I wrote it on my own" When she shares the poem with friends several laugh, "You didn't know?" "It's AI-generated!" She screams, "AI AI No!" When her boyfriend pops the question she quickly answers, "Yes!" Large diamond ring, so pretty She is very much impressed As she takes it for appraisal she presents the ring with glee When she asks about the 4Cs Jeweler simply says, "CZ" She wonders why in life she can never catch a break A Rolex watch, a lover's poem, a diamond ring, all fake ... Focusing on thoughts more mindful reminds her of what real life means Helping people is more important than accumulating things

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 12/17/2024 8:58:00 PM

Mark, my dear friend...Congrats on POTD! Supporting others and being supported greatest gifts in life to give and receive.

Mark Toney
Date: 12/18/2024 8:04:00 AM

Thank you, Barbara. Your comment is so true. Your visit is much appreciated.

David Crandall

Date: 11/25/2024 7:34:00 PM

Fun poem, Mark - with a moral.

Mark Toney
Date: 11/26/2024 3:44:00 AM

Thank you, David.

Gail Debole

Date: 11/18/2024 7:05:00 AM

Hi Mark, Cleverly written. Grabbed my attention and wouldn't let go. Strong examples to illustrate your point. The value of a "thing" is meaningless if the gifter cannot be trusted. A "thing" is valuable to a person (even if it is the cheapest item) if the relationship is real and honest.

Mark Toney
Date: 11/19/2024 9:13:00 AM

I'm so glad you liked it, Gail. Thank you for your thoughtful comment.

Martin Challender

Date: 10/15/2024 11:45:00 PM

Mark, this poem is the real deal. Well done.

Mark Toney
Date: 10/16/2024 9:18:00 AM

I like your comment, Martin—"the real deal." Much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/15/2024 6:39:00 PM

Love this, Mark! Fakery! Congrats on a genuine POTD!

Mark Toney
Date: 10/15/2024 8:33:00 PM

Thank you for brightening my day, Kim!

Suzette Richards

Date: 10/13/2024 10:19:00 PM

Congrats on your POD, Mark. An important message in the closing lines. Yes, we are often taken in by fakes, and people are no exception: narcissists abound.

Mark Toney
Date: 10/14/2024 7:55:00 AM

And scammers abound. Thank you for your comment, Suzette.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/13/2024 5:20:00 PM

I think ' being honest ' is more important than feeding lies to others. Always be true to yourself and everyone else. This is cute, clever and so creative. Congratulations Mark, on Poem of the Day. Thank you for always being you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Mark Toney
Date: 10/13/2024 8:15:00 PM

Yes, Brandy, it's better to tell the truth than to lie, even when it's difficult. Since we first met on this site, I’ve known you to be steadfast in your honesty. Thanks for giving me the 4Cs. ;)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/13/2024 12:05:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Have a wonderful Autumn day/week enjoying your win....................

Mark Toney
Date: 10/13/2024 4:55:00 PM

Thank you for your kind support, Paula. Write on!

Jim Slaughter

Date: 10/13/2024 10:08:00 AM

Delightful, Mark, and congrats on POTD.

Mark Toney
Date: 10/13/2024 10:29:00 AM

What a nice think to say, Jim. It's good to hear from you.

Arlo Parker

Date: 10/13/2024 9:23:00 AM

Spot on for the current trending topic, Mark. Worthy POTD creation with a point. :o))

Mark Toney
Date: 10/13/2024 10:28:00 AM

I appreciate that very much, Arlo.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/13/2024 5:45:00 AM

Mark, a great poem with an important message. Congratulations on POTD.

Mark Toney
Date: 10/13/2024 6:51:00 AM

Thank you, kind Tania.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/13/2024 5:13:00 AM

Hello Mark, What a great POTD. There are so many important things in life and the include true friendship and not accumulation. As my oldest daughter always says a minimalist is the way to go. Congratulations and Autumn Blessings My Friend, Daniel

Mark Toney
Date: 10/13/2024 6:50:00 AM

Much appreciated, Daniel. Your oldest daughter sounds very wise, like her father. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2024 3:31:00 AM

dropping back with many congrats on POTD Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Toney
Date: 10/13/2024 5:27:00 AM

Thanks for your support, Jan, and for letting me use your catchy “AI AI No!” phrase! ;)

Daisy Meadows

Date: 10/13/2024 2:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

Mark Toney
Date: 10/13/2024 5:25:00 AM

Thank you, Daisy.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/13/2024 1:12:00 AM

A verse of wisdom Mark, what's more important is people and family, if you have these you're richer than you know.. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/16/2024 4:51:00 AM

Lol, nothing wrong with getting your name out there.

Mark Toney
Date: 10/16/2024 4:04:00 AM

One friend I told jokingly said, “Mars wasn’t good enough for you?” :-)

Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/15/2024 10:00:00 PM

We just have to be patient now, roll on 2030. I think I must have told everyone that my name is on board.

Mark Toney
Date: 10/15/2024 8:40:00 PM

Liftoff! Solar arrays have deployed. Next stop Europa!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/14/2024 12:14:00 AM

All being well it should blast off at 12.06,(your time). 17.06 in the uk.

Mark Toney
Date: 10/13/2024 7:00:00 AM

“Second star to the right and straight on till morning.” Thanks for keeping the excitement going, Tom!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/13/2024 6:23:00 AM

Just noticed that the europa clipper is set for launch tommorow, fingers crossed Jupiter here we come.

Mark Toney
Date: 10/13/2024 5:24:00 AM

So true. Thank you, Tom.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/13/2024 12:45:00 AM

A little help goes a long way, much more than any diamonds or things can say. Wonderful poetry Mark. Congratulations on receiving thr honour of poem of the day… Beryl

Mark Toney
Date: 10/13/2024 5:23:00 AM

Your first sentence rhymes, Beryl. How cool is that! I appreciate your kind comment.

Maria Williams

Date: 10/13/2024 12:45:00 AM

Congrats on the POTD Mark. Your last two lines sum it all up. 'Helping people is more important..." After all what's the use of overindulgence and show pieces - most people will either not notice or think it's fake anyway. In fact, the ones that do notice the bling, are probably plastic fake people anyway. Best to be ones own self that's true riches. Thank you for sharing your profound thoughts. Hugs Maria

Mark Toney
Date: 10/13/2024 5:18:00 AM

Thank you, Maria. Your comments are profound as well and much appreciated.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 10/13/2024 12:39:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD Mark, you are most definitely genuine and a real life gem :) pretty looking fake poetry loses it's value when all is revealed and leaves everyone feeling cheated - great poem to highlight the AI AI No stance :)

Mark Toney
Date: 10/13/2024 5:11:00 AM

Thank you for your gracious words, Dilly Dally. You summed it up quite nicely. I’m happy that Jan let me use her “AI AI No!” phrase. :)

Karen Jones

Date: 10/13/2024 12:32:00 AM

A great engaging poem! Congrats on potd!

Mark Toney
Date: 10/13/2024 5:06:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely comment, Karen. What a nice surprise to wake up to!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/11/2024 4:39:00 PM

If it looks too good to be true it probably is , i love that final stanza Mark and after my hubbies cancer diagnosis it makes you realise what is important in life and you also appreciate those who stand by you and not fake friends:-( Thanks for crediting me with the AI AI NO line Mark:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Toney
Date: 10/11/2024 7:07:00 PM

You are so very welcome, Jan. I appreciate your very thoughtful comment sharing you and your hubbies’ experience.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/11/2024 2:04:00 PM

WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Looks like the world has gone fake. Fake this, fake that, where will it all end??? FAV for me.... Great Ending... Have a wonderful Autumn day writing away...................

Mark Toney
Date: 10/11/2024 7:02:00 PM

You’ve made my day, Paula! Thank you for the FAV, too. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.