The Truth In Love

~*~ The Truth in Love~*~

My truth lies not in the undulating waves
of the oceans tides
nor the ever changing moon
that endless is her guide
for the truths are hidden
in her great watery skirts
shadowed in her depths,
where lies with truth will flirt
yet high above the waters,
in the skies touched blue and gold
lies a pristine mountain valley
with all the truth ones heart can hold
for the wonder and the beauty
lie naked to the eye
life and love and happiness
enough to make one cry
and trimmed in sparkling wonder,
high atop the peaks
the stars dance nightly with the thunder
as the teardrops stain my cheeks
for never has more beauty,
and truth been spoken so true
as that within the mountain valley
where my heart resides with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Strand Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 12:41 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this past week Trudy .Rgds Brian
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July 25, 2009 at 7:04 PM
Congratulations Trudy on your featured write. Vince
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July 25, 2009 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations on having this beautiful poem featured. Love Heidie
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July 24, 2009 at 6:53 AM
wonderful write , you are such a creative,talented poet... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here...congrats on your poem being featured this week. great you! adeleke
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July 22, 2009 at 4:07 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :0)
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July 22, 2009 at 2:34 PM
congrats on being featured! check out some of my poems
Augustus Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 12:40 PM
Wow! I think this poem is perfect to say for someones wedding vows. It's lovely and soft and a really pretty poem.
Meyer Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 11:48 AM
And today you are on the front page even!! Whohoo!
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July 21, 2009 at 10:50 PM
Congratulations on this featured beautiful poetry. I enjoyed the read. Post some more. Ernilando
Meyer Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 5:46 PM
Hey, hey! Congratulations! You were right! You've been featured this week by golly... Are you sure I didn't write this poem? Love you.
Richards Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 12:55 PM
A beautifully crafted poem, Trudy....well deserving this featured place for more readers to view. Lovely visions of the sea, mountains, and love mixed together! ~ Carrie
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July 20, 2009 at 7:04 AM
love to me is rare as rainbow, i think i would have one some day...this is a wonderful write, you are such an intelligent poet. please keep writing friend and congrats on your awesome piece bieng featured this week. Adeleke
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July 20, 2009 at 6:00 AM
Trudy,..sorry for typo ! james
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July 20, 2009 at 5:59 AM
Tudy,..Congratulations having this great poem featured this week !! james
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July 19, 2009 at 3:01 PM
Good use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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July 19, 2009 at 2:56 PM
Congratulations on your feature this week Trudy, lovely warm poem>>James
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July 19, 2009 at 2:37 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Trudy. Love, Carol
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April 2, 2009 at 8:41 AM
Fine rhyming and flow... lovely imagery and sentiment. Well done Trudy! Best wishes, Keith
Jordan Avatar
September 16, 2008 at 1:26 AM
Trudy - Simply beautiful in ever aspect of the word - A tender loving respect of nature and love - I greatly enjoyed your poem - God Bless
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