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The Truth About True Greatness

The truth about true greatness Is not well understood The evidence we need to know For choosing something good There are two kinds of people The first are those who try To aim for good and righteousness And hate to tell a lie The second kind of person Just does the way they feel They only see what profits them And miss the bigger deal When you believe in goodliness In everything you do You draw a righteous power That works a change in you You see the inner person In everyone you meet The stranger that we see as bad You see as incomplete This gift of love will guide you In righteous ways of judging With kindliness and caring too With inner strength unbudging This power brings a helpful sense Of some impending harm It warns you of the danger there By sounding an alarm The opposite of what I speak Is manifestly strange The evidence of those who grow But never seem to change We look to those who lead us well Who always choose the right Who recognize the good from bad The darkness from the light The sweeter fruits of happiness Are not the roots of vice They come to us by living well By love and sacrifice The power that I speak about Exists to make us whole To build our true humanity By lifting every soul The difference in the ones who try And those who never do Is manifest in greatness By the light that shines in you!

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Date: 5/1/2021 1:57:00 PM
Yes, there are good people and there are bad people but there are varying degrees of both. Some bad people you would not want to meet any time especially at night on a lonely road. I enjoyed reading your winning work. Way to go..Congrats. Sara
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Date: 4/30/2021 4:42:00 PM
I think there is a second group of people. Ones like me. heehee. this is GRRRRREAT, Bryan. Thanks for looking me up recently. I am so behind here I never have time to visit old friends unless they pop in and remind me they are around. Let me see what else you have been up to here.
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Date: 4/30/2021 4:42:00 PM
I see this won in a contest. BIG CONGRATS then!
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Date: 4/29/2021 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations Bryan. Your poem shines a light on the results of efforts to live in the light balanced by the pain of those who choose not to live in the light. You have chosen well! Blessings of light to you!
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Date: 4/28/2021 10:00:00 PM
A beautifully written piece with great rhyme. The last stanza sums up the message perfectly. I think I've stated this before Bryan but you do write the type of poetry I like to read. Flowing rhymes with a message that are instantly accessible. Cheers - Gary
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Bryan Norton
Date: 4/29/2021 8:08:00 AM
Thank you, Gary. Your comments are always good and kind. Cheers, Bryan

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