The Truth About Masterpieces

Drifting beyond the lightest cloud.
Pastel clowns in postmortem rain parade.
Cascading in the cold moon dust
to shed this latest mascaraed.

Wounded memories hang loosely from the mind.
Autumn berries quivering three quarters past their prime.
When did "mediocre" pock the virgin tree?
When untruth told us, painting by numbers...
was our first gilded masterpiece?

Then entered our very first critique.
When honesty stated our works weren't their cup of tea.
Like evening frost clinging upon a tender leaf.
A devastating reality. 
They should have stated the slate-cold truth.
As soon as we could understand
that our masterpieces really weren't worth a damn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 29, 2012 at 1:48 PM
I think that my firt epiphany was that my imagination could conquer the world Anthony - your depth of metaphysics, and the originality of metaphor are masterful my friend - I'm very impressed with the hierophant quality and I'll be reading more of your work - hiding truth is a very bizzarre virtue - J.A.B. %
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September 28, 2012 at 9:37 PM
awee... nice..pd
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