The Truth

There once was dude from Duluth This dude only sported one tooth Wore tattered old jeans Quite airy they seemed Believe or not that's the truth, the hole truth © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/8/2015 4:08:00 PM

I read this one last night, but was just too tired to write. I loved it! Very good one, jack! I've missed the laughs. Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2015 5:09:00 PM

You are so loyal, my dear Miss Breidenthal! Yeehaw!!! xxxxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/8/2015 12:04:00 PM

There was once a Dragon, my friend... Who a poem tried to pen... It would have started a trend... But he could not find each line a rhyming end... So alas, it is LimmerJack we will now recommend... PS. Don't worry... He's still too young... But if he keeps practicing... Someday we promised him his own PoetrySoup site... when he learns how to rhyme end... and spell... and how to use a computer... Ummm... He just went out to play. Goes to show you can't keep a good baby Dragon down! LOL

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/8/2015 2:06:00 AM

Has to be the truth if you say so Jack and no lesser, the hole of it!

Tim Smith

Date: 9/7/2015 11:51:00 AM

Must be a hockey player.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/7/2015 8:37:00 PM

You are probably right! LOL