The Truth

The dead filter through with lifeless dreams of flesh flowing in a sea of blood and

sorrows that call out to the sins of those polluting the earth with hatred dimming our

prospective on life's greatest treasures and causing a wave of untamed shifts destroying 

all that is good and blinding us with lies of a better tomorrow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 6:24 AM
My blog topic today is a bit like this please comment? This is FREE VERSE and it would read a bit better broken into more lines...break after dream line 1...line 2 life..then after prospective..start next line at And causing..last break after destroying. Light & Love and welcome to the soup!
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August 20, 2010 at 4:11 PM
Wow what words woven where wit was working!! very depressing like you said! well written!
Brown Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Adam. I enjoyed reading your writing this morning. I am hoping you have a wonderful weekend and find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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