The Truest of Friends

the truest of friends

are the sturdiest of trees

with roots undying


April 24, 2018 for Mick Talbot's 'haiku' poetry contest
Theme: 'Human Nature'
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Roper Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Andrea, great imagery {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*
Cunningham Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Lovely hakiu Andrea, congratulations. Tom
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 1:55 PM
very well said Andrea, Many congratulations on your win in the haiku contest :-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:40 AM
Just stopping back with congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 8:46 AM
You have said this well! Congrats, Andrea!
Gentry Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 7:32 AM
Congratulations Andrea!! An awesome haiku, one of the best.
Flower Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 7:04 AM
A haiku of undying friendships... simply beautiful, Andrea. As always. :) Congrats.
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 6:32 AM
- Congratulations on your great haiku, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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April 27, 2018 at 1:42 AM
P.S....the haiku (hokku) was the first two stanzas of a poetic write called a renga, introduced in the 13th century, a collaborative poetic muse written by two poets...the first stanza three lines consisting of seventeen syllables by one poet and the second stanza by a second poet was a couplet three lines consisting of seven syllables in each line...these writes were easily 100 stanzas long You have made my Friday morning totally enjoyable Andrea with this haiku of yours, I definitely have been inspired to write whatever is causing the frying within mine cerebrum... *Smiles...again, thank you much dear poet...much love, james
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April 27, 2018 at 1:42 AM
Well, i see that you nailed it by the comments below dear poet ! Congratulations Andrea...Awesome write Andrea ! You have written the Haiku as it was reintroduced by Matsuo Basho in the 17th century, likewise highly accepted by the poesy lovers of Japan, too, the poetic literary scholars of that era until this day. I really like this haiku Andrea, have a great night, much love, james
Oimbo Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 1:38 AM
true friendship is rare. true friendship is s treasure
Gauthier Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 10:47 PM
Beautiful, Andrea. Congrats on your win.
George   Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Great Haiku, Andrea...and oh so true.
Anish Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:02 PM
I believe it was William Blake who wrote"The bird an nest The spider a web Man friendship". Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Devonshire Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 4:44 PM
It does take sturdy roots and a lot of nurturing to keep friendships flourishing. Wise words to remember, Andrea! Best wishes in the contest with this meaningful haiku to which all can relate.
Sergi Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 3:41 PM
A very significant poem that I can relate with, Andrea. Unfortunately some roots can be uprooted even after 35 years. My compliments!
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 5:40 PM
Yes, Ralph, those are the "diseased" ones that abandon us for no good reason!
Horn Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 9:16 AM
You are 2,555. That is your magic five.
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 5:41 PM
you funny guy. If I posted all the poems in my files I would have closer to 3 thousand but I stopped counting a long time ago!
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April 25, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Well expressed Andrea. I hope your Forest is filled with deep rooted trees.
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 1:29 AM
it is my friend,it is. And the deepest are my sisters.
Pandit Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 6:18 AM
So true..everlasting friendships.. such treasures..lovely theme, Andrea.
Neumann Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:23 AM
Very true and well said. Good luck in the contest
Krutsinger Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 8:37 PM
The truth well-written, and with my favorite subject of all, trees.
Krampe Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 7:02 PM
That's a great image, Andrea. Lovely haiku.
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April 24, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Wonderful! The image of the tree flourishes here :) lovely haiku, a winner for me! xomo
Bauer Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 6:31 PM
very cool, andrea! i like this very much...
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