The Truest of Friends

the truest of friends

are the sturdiest of trees

with roots undying


April 24, 2018 for Mick Talbot's 'haiku' poetry contest
Theme: 'Human Nature'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 5/1/2018 7:25:00 PM
Andrea, great imagery {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/30/2018 8:25:00 AM
Lovely hakiu Andrea, congratulations. Tom
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Date: 4/27/2018 1:55:00 PM
very well said Andrea, Many congratulations on your win in the haiku contest :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/27/2018 11:40:00 AM
Just stopping back with congratulations!
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Date: 4/27/2018 8:46:00 AM
You have said this well! Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 4/27/2018 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea!! An awesome haiku, one of the best.
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Date: 4/27/2018 7:04:00 AM
A haiku of undying friendships... simply beautiful, Andrea. As always. :) Congrats.
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Date: 4/27/2018 6:32:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great haiku, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/27/2018 1:42:00 AM
Well, i see that you nailed it by the comments below dear poet ! Congratulations Andrea...Awesome write Andrea ! You have written the Haiku as it was reintroduced by Matsuo Basho in the 17th century, likewise highly accepted by the poesy lovers of Japan, too, the poetic literary scholars of that era until this day. I really like this haiku Andrea, have a great night, much love, james
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Date: 4/27/2018 1:42:00 AM
P.S....the haiku (hokku) was the first two stanzas of a poetic write called a renga, introduced in the 13th century, a collaborative poetic muse written by two poets...the first stanza three lines consisting of seventeen syllables by one poet and the second stanza by a second poet was a couplet three lines consisting of seven syllables in each line...these writes were easily 100 stanzas long You have made my Friday morning totally enjoyable Andrea with this haiku of yours, I definitely have been inspired to write whatever is causing the frying within mine cerebrum... *Smiles...again, thank you much dear poet...much love, james
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Date: 4/27/2018 1:38:00 AM
true friendship is rare. true friendship is s treasure
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Date: 4/26/2018 10:47:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/26/2018 8:03:00 AM
Great Haiku, Andrea...and oh so true.
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Date: 4/25/2018 10:02:00 PM
I believe it was William Blake who wrote"The bird an nest The spider a web Man friendship". Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/25/2018 4:44:00 PM
It does take sturdy roots and a lot of nurturing to keep friendships flourishing. Wise words to remember, Andrea! Best wishes in the contest with this meaningful haiku to which all can relate.
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Date: 4/25/2018 3:41:00 PM
A very significant poem that I can relate with, Andrea. Unfortunately some roots can be uprooted even after 35 years. My compliments!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/25/2018 5:40:00 PM
Yes, Ralph, those are the "diseased" ones that abandon us for no good reason!
Date: 4/25/2018 9:16:00 AM
You are 2,555. That is your magic five.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/25/2018 5:41:00 PM
you funny guy. If I posted all the poems in my files I would have closer to 3 thousand but I stopped counting a long time ago!
Date: 4/25/2018 8:33:00 AM
Well expressed Andrea. I hope your Forest is filled with deep rooted trees.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/27/2018 1:29:00 AM
it is my friend,it is. And the deepest are my sisters.
Date: 4/25/2018 6:18:00 AM
So true..everlasting friendships.. such treasures..lovely theme, Andrea.
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Date: 4/25/2018 1:23:00 AM
Very true and well said. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/24/2018 8:37:00 PM
The truth well-written, and with my favorite subject of all, trees.
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Date: 4/24/2018 7:02:00 PM
That's a great image, Andrea. Lovely haiku.
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Date: 4/24/2018 6:54:00 PM
Wonderful! The image of the tree flourishes here :) lovely haiku, a winner for me! xomo
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Date: 4/24/2018 6:31:00 PM
very cool, andrea! i like this very much...
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