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The Trickster and the Moon

Surely there is a sly trickster in the sky tonight
      He’s pulled a magic cape slowly across the moon
      As there could never be scientific explanation
      For the golden beauty seen and gone too soon….

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2015

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Daver Austin Date: 10/16/2015 10:53:00 AM Just as fine the second time. Congrats. Love, daver Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/10/2015 1:06:00 PM love how you rhymed yours. this is awesome. Congrats for your win. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 10/9/2015 12:26:00 AM Barbara, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT Login to Reply Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/9/2015 10:08:00 AM Thank you SKAT...appreciate your stopping bny my poems. BG

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/8/2015 3:27:00 PM Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara Login to Reply Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/9/2015 10:08:00 AM Hi Sara..Haven't been around much lately, its good to hear from you..Thank you!BG

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/8/2015 2:36:00 AM Wonderful write Barbara! Congrats on superb win! Login to Reply Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/9/2015 10:09:00 AM How are you my dear? I haven't been around to much and miss seeing your name and your work. Thank you! BG

Jan Allison Date: 10/7/2015 3:25:00 PM Beautiful imagery Barbara congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/7/2015 6:45:00 PM thank you my dear...this one was fun.

Eve Roper Date: 10/7/2015 2:28:00 PM Barbara, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve Login to Reply Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/7/2015 6:46:00 PM thank you Eve, you certainly got some wonderful poems for this one. BG

Dan Cwiak Date: 10/7/2015 1:41:00 PM You can be a trickster when you write like this. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Login to Reply Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/7/2015 6:47:00 PM thanks Dan, appreciate your comment. Im off to read all the winners. BG

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/2/2015 5:14:00 PM I LIKES IT!!!! Good luck in this fun contest. Login to Reply Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/2/2015 5:35:00 PM thanks dear, have been trying to get back in the swing of things..feeling a bit better...Glad you liked it. BG

Daver Austin Date: 10/2/2015 11:58:00 AM Yes, the mind is a trickster. I like what you saw float across the moon. LOve, daver Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/2/2015 6:14:00 AM Ah! This is lovely and creative, Barbara! Alas, beauty is never meant to last!! gl in the contest. // paul Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 10/1/2015 10:50:00 PM Magical thoughts Barbara very nice. Login to Reply Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/2/2015 5:35:00 PM It did seem magical to me..thank you so much! BG

Laura Leiser Date: 10/1/2015 10:37:00 PM I love the "sly trickster" concept in your excellent poem, Barbara. Just a small thing, but I think you may want to change "to soon" to "too soon", for correct spelling. Good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/2/2015 5:34:00 PM Thank you so much, for the comment AND the heads up. Barbara