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The Tree With An All-Seeing Eye Nw

A shrill ocular tree with howling wind sounds.  Sparkles for a brief period of time each day.  However, visitors are enticed from all around.  to obtain tree-wise insights into the display. They are never privy to any facts whatsoever.  Just spare me the wind sighing as they pass.  Yet, there's a fabulous note of something clever.  In some wise and auld, must shatter as glass. Once, I went on a trip to check the tree.  and can detect its message in the breeze.  As leaves tickled, I slept in, dreaming on my knee.  I whim of a dear friend who was welt by the keys. Along the street, we strolled side by side. She leaned and gave me a kiss on the cheek.  Time is precious and runs through my mind.  Love exists all around, so why do you speak? I am assured that the auld tree was winking at me.  Suddenly, I had the resolution to look around.  Because goodness and truth are the guarantees.  What I saw in my vision woke me to fact sound.
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Andresen Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 8:36 AM
- A wonderful and a little mysterious poem, Las :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :)
George Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 1:43 AM
Highly esoteric and I can hardly extricate i the intricasies of this stupendous writing or decode the mysterious message the tree conveys. Congratulations on your great win Lasaad !
Messina Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 8:34 PM
David was spot on when he said, "Another class act...and a delight to read" Love this, Lasaad. Congratulations on your placement in my contest...Charlie
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October 23, 2022 at 12:56 PM
A fantastical piece of poetic work Lasaad nature and love interwoven inside a mysterious dream, or vision? esoteric secrets imparted by the old magical tree, sheer and utter abandonment of the outside world, until woken to realisation, another class act, and a delight to read, cheers David
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