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The Tree We Grew To Love

At the bottom of our garden Standing for many many years Below seasonal greens and blossoms And all of natures tears This gem of harvesting joy Showered crops of richness grow For season after season When autumn came it showed It's fruits of life stood out Against the nature of each day And all who graced this marvel Were always said to say This tree from mother earth Has given year after year In rain, hail or shine In beautiful appear Again this year we were graced With baskets of apple gold But sadness cloaked our hearts For our tree would never grow old The first winter storm Spewed bolts of lightning blue Amidst the claps of thunder Was gone the tree we knew We were awoken in the night By creaks of deafening cry Looking out the window Brought tears to our eyes This marvel that we grew up with Was cut down in it's prime For nature had decided That this was not it's time The very next morning Amongst the devastation Was our tree of life Shattered, lay her creation Now many months have passed On this stump we have grown to love And recall that stormy night And that bolt from above

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/18/2010 10:19:00 AM
This sounds like such a true accounting of a tree....it gives that sense of loss. Well Done James! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/17/2010 10:16:00 PM
What a different take you took with this James with that bolt of lightning and so wonderfully written too--- Congrats on your win with this moving poem :) --nikko :)
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Date: 11/17/2010 10:11:00 PM
James...many congrats on big win in the contest... Luv/Best wishes.... hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/17/2010 9:43:00 PM
Congratulatioms, James, on your awesome win. This reminds me a bit of my decorative pear tree. It's a magnificent tree and with a summer storm, 1/3 of it fell off from the side. It made me so sad. I hope it regrows that portion that came off. I hope that it does not die from that missing part. Do you think it will live? Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/17/2010 7:54:00 PM
Congrats James on your winning poem in Matt's contest fell in luv with a tree stump.. a great write and win ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 11/17/2010 7:48:00 PM
A beautiful and touching poem. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 11/17/2010 4:31:00 PM
I hate it when trees die, I love trees! Very nice write here congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 10/15/2010 2:47:00 PM
Chilling, James. It's terrible the way nature sometimes reclaims some of her own beauty by lightning, tsunamis, earthquakes. I hope you didn't really lose this precious tree. The stump would be a sad place to sit and recall this tree's bountiful days. Goes to my faves, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/15/2010 10:10:00 AM
lovely entry for the contest James, good luck
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Date: 10/15/2010 9:25:00 AM
Sad feeling I get reading this tremendous poem Sir ! Well; I hope that you have some seeds from the tree and patients for offspring for the next blessed bite ! Much love, james
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