The Tree Outside My Window

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The Tree Outside My Window

Outside my window is a tree
with a solitary leaf
stubbornly not giving in
to join the pile beneath.

The tree stands naked to the stars
on a November night
bare to heaven in the fall
as nature deems it right.

Peeking through my blinds 
I’ll see it coated with the snow,
attired like a winter bride
in crescent white moonglow.

This tree outside my window
has been a trusted friend,
whispering upon a breeze
every now and then.
 
11/11/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 4/20/2018 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations, Sian, on your podium placement with this lovely poem. I really enjoyed listening to you recite it! You did it so well. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/20/2018 4:31:00 AM
- A poem that deserves its first place ... Congratulations, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/19/2018 9:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem. Excellent rhyme and subject. I enjoyed.
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Date: 4/19/2018 4:35:00 PM
A lovely poem, Sian. Thanks for entering my contest with beauty worthy of a gold medal win.
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Date: 11/11/2017 6:05:00 PM
Sounds like a tree you can sit under in the heat of summer
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Date: 11/11/2017 3:16:00 PM
Wonderful rendition of a long lasting friendship. Delightful.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 11/11/2017 3:34:00 PM
Thanks, Line. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 11/11/2017 2:17:00 PM
You are one talented lady, your poems never fail to deliver on all poetry-levels. So good to see your face. I've been absent awhile (since March) and one of the first things I noticed was you had placed a pic. Very nice, Janis. I ALWAYS enjoy your poems for you are consistently an impressive writer. All the best ... CayCay
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 11/11/2017 3:35:00 PM
CayCay, I will tell you that you have been missed. Your comments are sincerely appreciated and I know they are from your heart so they mean even more to me. Thanks ever so much.
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