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The Tree Outside My Window

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The Tree Outside My Window Outside my window is a tree with a solitary leaf stubbornly not giving in to join the pile beneath. The tree stands naked to the stars on a November night bare to heaven in the fall as nature deems it right. Peeking through my blinds I’ll see it coated with the snow, attired like a winter bride in crescent white moonglow. This tree outside my window has been a trusted friend, whispering upon a breeze every now and then. 11/11/17

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Date: 4/20/2018 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations, Sian, on your podium placement with this lovely poem. I really enjoyed listening to you recite it! You did it so well. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/20/2018 4:31:00 AM
- A poem that deserves its first place ... Congratulations, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/19/2018 9:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem. Excellent rhyme and subject. I enjoyed.
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Date: 4/19/2018 4:35:00 PM
A lovely poem, Sian. Thanks for entering my contest with beauty worthy of a gold medal win.
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Date: 11/11/2017 6:05:00 PM
Sounds like a tree you can sit under in the heat of summer
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Date: 11/11/2017 3:16:00 PM
Wonderful rendition of a long lasting friendship. Delightful.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/11/2017 3:34:00 PM
Thanks, Line. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 11/11/2017 2:17:00 PM
You are one talented lady, your poems never fail to deliver on all poetry-levels. So good to see your face. I've been absent awhile (since March) and one of the first things I noticed was you had placed a pic. Very nice, Janis. I ALWAYS enjoy your poems for you are consistently an impressive writer. All the best ... CayCay
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/11/2017 3:35:00 PM
CayCay, I will tell you that you have been missed. Your comments are sincerely appreciated and I know they are from your heart so they mean even more to me. Thanks ever so much.

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