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The Tree of Life

Standing at the edge of a lush cornfield
Snuggling close to a bubbling brook
one majestic oak tree stands
upright like a sentinel guarding
the crops swaying in the breeze
with sunbeams dancing upon them
under a brilliant blue sky.
 
As the day wears out
the dusk gracefully sneaks in
blushing like a shy bride
entering the bedecked bridal suite
wearing a wedding gown
embellished with the radiance
of a crimson sunset gilding
the landscape in a shimmering hue.

The birds of all sizes and colors
and dryads, ducks, squirrels and owls 
converge upon 
its welcoming foliage to roost;

This expansive canopy of leaves
like one mammoth quilt
affords these weary souls
a safe haven in the quiet of night.



~07/30/15
~Nature poem contest by Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/5/2015 5:45:00 PM
Lovely imagery. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/5/2015 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations I see you are winning more and more contests and of course most well deserved....
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/5/2015 11:00:00 AM
Thanks Judy.
Date: 8/5/2015 8:23:00 AM
Well penned, beautiful imagery.
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Date: 8/5/2015 8:21:00 AM
Perfect nature poem indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/5/2015 11:01:00 AM
Glad you liked it. Thanks Sara
Date: 8/5/2015 12:10:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome win, Abdul! Xoxo
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Date: 8/5/2015 12:09:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem, Abdul, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/5/2015 11:01:00 AM
Thanks Eve. You did pretty good yourself. Congrats.
Date: 8/4/2015 10:23:00 PM
Beauty of nature so well penned, awesome abdul! Congrats on first place win!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/5/2015 11:02:00 AM
Thanks Upma. Appreciate your comments.
Date: 8/4/2015 9:41:00 PM
Abdul, Congratulations on your win..... SKAT
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Date: 8/4/2015 7:58:00 PM
Well conceived and executed. Worthy of the top place. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/5/2015 11:02:00 AM
Thanks Joyce.
Date: 8/4/2015 5:15:00 PM
a very fine poem Abdul congrats on 1st place hugs 7
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/4/2015 6:03:00 PM
Thanks Shadow, appreciate much.
Date: 8/4/2015 4:12:00 PM
wonderful visuals Abdul many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/4/2015 6:04:00 PM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 8/2/2015 10:27:00 AM
beautiful scenery, abdul... this looks better than mine!.. huggs
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/2/2015 11:09:00 AM
Ha, you are simply being nice. Like always, appreciate your comments.
Date: 8/2/2015 9:41:00 AM
I love big trees! This is a beautiful visual you have created.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/2/2015 10:23:00 AM
Let's build a Tree house! Thanks for your comments.

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