The Tree of Life

Standing at the edge of a lush cornfield
Snuggling close to a bubbling brook
one majestic oak tree stands
upright like a sentinel guarding
the crops swaying in the breeze
with sunbeams dancing upon them
under a brilliant blue sky.
 
As the day wears out
the dusk gracefully sneaks in
blushing like a shy bride
entering the bedecked bridal suite
wearing a wedding gown
embellished with the radiance
of a crimson sunset gilding
the landscape in a shimmering hue.

The birds of all sizes and colors
and dryads, ducks, squirrels and owls 
converge upon 
its welcoming foliage to roost;

This expansive canopy of leaves
like one mammoth quilt
affords these weary souls
a safe haven in the quiet of night.



~07/30/15
~Nature poem contest by Shadow Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Delaney Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 5:45 PM
Lovely imagery. Congratulations on your win.
Konos Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 8:54 AM
Congratulations I see you are winning more and more contests and of course most well deserved....
Mandani Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 11:00 AM
Thanks Judy.
Inman Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 8:23 AM
Well penned, beautiful imagery.
Kendrick Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Perfect nature poem indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara
Mandani Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 11:01 AM
Glad you liked it. Thanks Sara
Harding Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 12:10 AM
Congrats on your awesome win, Abdul! Xoxo
Roper Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 12:09 AM
Such a beautiful poem, Abdul, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Mandani Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 11:01 AM
Thanks Eve. You did pretty good yourself. Congrats.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 10:23 PM
Beauty of nature so well penned, awesome abdul! Congrats on first place win!
Mandani Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 11:02 AM
Thanks Upma. Appreciate your comments.
A  Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 9:41 PM
Abdul, Congratulations on your win..... SKAT
Johnson Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 7:58 PM
Well conceived and executed. Worthy of the top place. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mandani Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 11:02 AM
Thanks Joyce.
Hamilton Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 5:15 PM
a very fine poem Abdul congrats on 1st place hugs 7
Mandani Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Thanks Shadow, appreciate much.
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 4:12 PM
wonderful visuals Abdul many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Mandani Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 6:04 PM
Thanks Jan.
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 10:27 AM
beautiful scenery, abdul... this looks better than mine!.. huggs
Mandani Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 11:09 AM
Ha, you are simply being nice. Like always, appreciate your comments.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 9:41 AM
I love big trees! This is a beautiful visual you have created.
Mandani Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 10:23 AM
Let's build a Tree house! Thanks for your comments.
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