The Tree Branch Falling

The tree branch falling
As I looked out my window
I saw you walking
Farther and farther away
A swan flies over a field
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 24, 2009 at 1:18 PM
Nice use of imagery. Interesting presentation of your message. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Have a nice day! Karen
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March 20, 2009 at 11:13 AM
love this!!!
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March 16, 2009 at 4:03 PM
Lovely images....it has elements of a peaceful country scene. ~ Carrie
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March 16, 2009 at 12:07 PM
Nice tanka Jim, I left you some soup mail...Raul
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