The Tree, Bare In Mid-Summer

the tree, bare
in mid-summer
branches withered
bark peeling
a condemned sigh
rustled through
her brittle leaves
I had to look away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mcguire Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 6:17 PM
I knw the feeling, Ive lost a few trees and I think of what could have been!
Wolf Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 6:45 PM
Lose one tree, plant two! Smiles, Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 3:36 PM
Oh, the stark melancholy of this is so sad, the doldrums of summer, if you will-
Wolf Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 6:45 PM
Yes, they are, indeed, doldrums, as you put it. :) gw
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 3:05 PM
Hello Gershown Wolf, i happen to think that the tree is dying. Enjoy y9our day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, I have often wondered how long a dead tree stays standing in the forest. Then how long it takes to grow back. Have a nice day my friend.
Wolf Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 6:42 PM
You're right, Darlene. The poor tree is going, going, gone... Thanks, Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 11:39 PM
Enjoyed the empathy and imagery.
Wolf Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 3:45 PM
That's an interesting comment, i.e., that you enjoyed the empathy... I'll try to be more empathetic in my other poems perhaps. ~ Emphatically yours
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