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:::The Tree Acknowledged:::

I was the first man, to descend from the trees No cities or houses, just an innate desire to breed Stumbling upon paradise, finding everything I need And in exchange for a spare rib, God granted me Eve A no brainier you could say, all things considered She's so beautiful, my fig leaf is partially triggered Along comes one caveat, well nothing's free I figured Don't Eat From That Tree, as we both nervously tittered Life was so wonderful, and enjoyment was of plenty Rocked each others boat, quite a bit more than friendly Except for a voice in that tree, always trying to tempt me I told Eve to give it a wide berth, could well be some enemy Most times after lunch, we cavorted in the stream Laughing and teasing, one could say living the dream Playing hide and seek, kiss n tell, you know what I mean But something was still missing, knowledge or so it seemed One day whilst hunting, leaving Eve home all alone She got drawn to that tree, in her head a seed's sewn If You Eat My Fruit, the mind of your maker will be known Split this apple with pretty boy, and I swear all will be shown Before dinner Eve asks me, to share a golden delicious We craved more knowledge, it's desire, burning within us So after a lifetime of obedience, we disobeyed Gods wishes Ignorance proving to be most costly, of all human conditions By David Kavanagh

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Date: 9/19/2021 5:29:00 PM
Indeed David Sir A truly delicious tree dripping with biblical imagery seed , fruit , leaves Fertilized with more than a little pondering and knowledge of the bigger questions. Maybe something far more knowledgeable than us mere human beings like a talking snake can answer
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/20/2021 6:07:00 AM
Won't find any real answers here Christopher, only a lot of puzzling questions, I honestly believe we need to search our human condition, to find out what the hell is our ultimate goal, other than to procreate like the animals in the trees, cheers David
Date: 9/19/2021 2:24:00 PM
Seems we've been paying the price for their disobedience ever since, I've always believed man with his knowledge will eventually cause the destruction of all mankind. Love your interpretation of the Adam and Eve story David. Tom
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/19/2021 2:47:00 PM
Thank you Tom, it's certainly within our abilities to destroy most living things on earth, I wrote this from an agnostic point of view of life and creation, I find it very difficult to reconcile seeking knowledge as anything but human nature, it's indeed our greatest strength and weakness, cheers David

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