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For Seth Pina's Tree Contest

Submit a new or old poem about a tree, can be fictional or non fictional.

The Tree

I stood as though reborn on mounded dirt,
which seemed so moist it strangely could assuage
the ache from bowels that howled from so much hurt.
Would ground then be my cure for pain and rage?
Enticed, I deeply pressed each foot through soil
till they took root and fixed me to a spot.
My ever-thickening trunk served well to foil
the plots of those who’d cut me. . . . they could not!
My limbs, though mighty branches, could not bend;
stubbornly I fought my transplantation.
I weathered storms that God or man might send,
sightless, living long in desolation.
Self preservation did this much for me-
old loved ones passed and I remained a tree.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Carmack Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 6:41 AM
This was a hard contest to judge. Needed about 5 more placements, but I love the Premiers now. Congrats and thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 9:08 PM
Thanks. What a delightful surprise!
Reese Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 5:03 AM
With the exception of lines 2 and 4 not rhyming it's very well done as it gives great imagery as I imagine a young sapling becoming a mighty oak I would love your honest opinion on my newest poem to make sure it's done correctly
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 4:46 PM
Gosh. I have been pronouncing assuage like mirage all this time and didn't even know I was wrong. So weird! Thanks for letting me know.
Kendrick Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 4:02 AM
Creative writing, Andrea, in giving a human personality to the tree for this contest, this work reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K.
Jones Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 3:36 AM
Very creative idea for the contest Andrea! Seth will like it!
Hind Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 1:15 PM
LOVE this, Andrea- a fav
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 1:46 PM
Thanks so much, Paige
Rodrigues Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 9:45 AM
Ooh…very cool!
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 1:47 PM
Thanks. Did you submit a tree poem?
Daniel Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 12:25 AM
Great sonnet, Andrea, about a tree, this contest is filling up fast... By the way, it's easy to create songs with AI, we just have to give the lyrics and choice of melody, the tune and the voice is done within minutes:) I use Suno app... You can try it sometime..
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 11:49 AM
John explained it to me. I got an account at Suno. Now I just need how to get it to Soup. In some time . . .
George Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 8:25 PM
"I weathered storms that God or man might send,"- A tree has a story of weathering adversities. Braving storm and rain, it remains rooted firmly to the ground. It is a symbol of resilience. A great poem, dear Andrea.
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 1:52 PM
Thank you
Bayles Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 7:58 PM
Such a nice way to show the character of a tree.
Smith  Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 7:41 PM
Decisions though sound at the time may not be so wise later. This tree poem has opened a dream.
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