Sara Kendrick Poet Shape

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The Tree

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   Look,  Look
Here I stand next to 
clear running stream that 
feeds my leaves and mighty 
trunk. A strong oak that still 
is  young  and  growing  until  cut
chopped purposely to  build  a  cross 
a rugged cross  roughly  hewn  out  for  my
creator  to  be   crucified     
how I 
wept
when 
He was 
nailed 
then He
d i e d 

W     v    s              e    d          y    r        o            s 
   a      e             F     e        m            o        t


                                          

Written: 03/18/23

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Anonomus Scorpio March 30, 2023 at 7:20 PM Sara, heartfelt congratulations on such a beautiful poem and your contest win! Concrete poems are some of my favorite.... shhh don't tell anyone :-) A.S Sara Kendrick March 31, 2023 at 10:33 AM Thank you, A.S..I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations and leaving such an encouraging comment. Sara

Clifford Villalon March 29, 2023 at 12:51 PM Congratulations Miss Sara... my late greeting to a poetess on your winning poem! :) Cliff Clifford Villalon March 29, 2023 at 12:56 PM Your tree is so cute and poetic! :) Sara Kendrick March 29, 2023 at 12:52 PM Why thank you, Clifford. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Fin Chuuk March 29, 2023 at 6:13 AM Woohoo Sara, congrats on your big win! :) Sara Kendrick March 29, 2023 at 12:49 PM Thank you for the fine congratulations on this one. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting. Sara

Alexis Y. March 26, 2023 at 4:45 PM Wow! Sara, This is so well done. Good shape and content.Congratulations on your win. Enjoy the rest of you day:-) Alexis Sara Kendrick March 27, 2023 at 8:07 AM Thank you, Alexis. I think it will still be wet rest of the day here, but I think it will slow down and that will be a good thing. Sara

Valsa George March 26, 2023 at 9:03 AM Simply lovely. Remarkable lay out and lofty theme and content ! Congratulations Sara on your trophy win. Sara Kendrick March 27, 2023 at 7:59 AM Thank you, Valsa for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Vijay Pandit March 23, 2023 at 6:56 AM Back with BIG congrats on your trophy win, Sara. Such a creative poem! Sara Kendrick March 27, 2023 at 7:56 AM Why, thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara

Gershon Wolf March 22, 2023 at 6:50 PM Brilliant, Sara. So creative. Kudos! ~ Gershon Sara Kendrick March 23, 2023 at 5:03 AM Gershon, I appreciate the kind review. Sara

Gary Radice March 21, 2023 at 1:46 AM Congratulations on your trophy win Sara! I'm now going to uote your good self. Way To Go! :) Cheers - Gary Sara Kendrick March 21, 2023 at 6:31 AM Why, thank you, Gary. I appreciate the kind review and the time spent here. Sara

Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2023 at 12:06 PM amazing. Which contest did you get a trophy in? One of Brian's? Sara Kendrick March 20, 2023 at 2:34 PM Yes, Andrea, this was in Brian's contest. Thank you for the visit. Sara

Beata Agustin March 20, 2023 at 9:26 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Sara Kendrick March 20, 2023 at 2:52 PM Thank you, Beata for stopping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Christuraj Alex March 20, 2023 at 7:08 AM "how I wept when He was nailed" - Indeed, a very great writing. Congratulations! Sara Kendrick March 20, 2023 at 2:55 PM Alex, Thanks for dropping by with congratulations. Your visit is uplifting. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler March 20, 2023 at 7:04 AM A great shape poem filled with faith. Very creative Sara! Congratulations on your win! :) Sara Kendrick March 20, 2023 at 2:58 PM Your visit, Linda Alice, is encouraging. Sara

JC Brul March 20, 2023 at 5:31 AM Congratulations Sara. So creative, so cute!! Sara Kendrick March 20, 2023 at 2:59 PM I appreciate the nice review, JCB. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2023 at 3:00 AM - Congratulations, Sara :) - hugs Sara Kendrick March 21, 2023 at 6:40 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise, I appreciate the congratulations. Sara

Joanna Daniel March 20, 2023 at 2:30 AM Wonderful shape and poem, Sara, congratulations on trophy win:) Sara Kendrick March 21, 2023 at 6:42 AM Why, thank you, Jo. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Unseeking Seeker March 20, 2023 at 1:50 AM Ah ~ were it not for Wendy, I’d probably never have seen the hidden message ‘waves feed my roots’. Warmest congratulations on your top win, Sara Sara Kendrick March 21, 2023 at 6:48 AM I am glad you figured it out, US. Thanks for dropping by with congratulations. The waves at the bottom were correct on the computer or on the post page but then when it transfered they were not correct anymore. I decided to just leave it because if I tried to change it the whole thing might go off kilter. Thanks, Sara

Speaks Volumes March 20, 2023 at 1:30 AM Congratulations Sara. Terrific entry in the contest. Took me a second or two to read Waves Feed My Roots. Well done. Sara Kendrick March 21, 2023 at 6:52 AM Glad you figured out my waves. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara

Regina Mcintosh March 20, 2023 at 1:24 AM Exceptional. Congrats and God bless you always, Love, Gina Sara Kendrick March 21, 2023 at 7:00 AM I always need all the blessings I can get, Regina. Thanks. Sara

Victor Buhagiar March 19, 2023 at 12:47 PM Lovely shape and verse. Sara Kendrick March 21, 2023 at 7:00 AM Why, thank you, Victor. Sara

Margarita Lillico March 19, 2023 at 12:19 PM Beautiful! Sara Kendrick March 21, 2023 at 6:59 AM I appreciate the compliment, Margarita. Your visit is uplifting. Sara

Joyce Faure March 19, 2023 at 10:02 AM I Love your poem thanks for sharing Sara Kendrick March 21, 2023 at 6:57 AM Thank you, Joyce, for the visit. Sara

Fin Chuuk March 18, 2023 at 5:30 PM A great message in this tree shape of art. Beautifully creative. :) Sara Kendrick March 19, 2023 at 6:42 AM Fin, I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

Joe Maverick March 18, 2023 at 4:37 PM A pleasure to visit and take this in Sara.' Great communication beautifull message.' Sara Kendrick March 19, 2023 at 6:40 AM Thank you, Joe. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2023 at 2:21 PM - Lovely poem and shape, Sara :) - hugs Sara Kendrick March 19, 2023 at 6:34 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise, I appreciate the visit. Sara

Vijay Pandit March 18, 2023 at 5:54 AM Highly emotive write, Sara. Your creativity on display in this Shape poem. The tree speaks brilliantly. Sara Kendrick March 18, 2023 at 11:01 AM I am glad you feel the emotion within the lines. I believe your feeling the emotion speaks of your faith. Your visit inspires me. Sara

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