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The Treaty of the Voracious

Utopian only in the eyes of the incipient yet vastly virtuous inverse commanding leagues of the damned. Unbound in a secular disposition it rots, the treaty of the voracious. A reciprocal nexus lapsing into a grave valor. Inter-dimensional seals torn asunder for control. Looping utopia, learning untold evil.

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Lucas Williams

Date: 3/25/2011 12:23:00 PM

is this a rebuttal to what you wrote on the critque? Thanks i strive to aleviate mortal coils from my perception albeit metaphysically it stills rings true in vein of my progression. im glad to see someone cares to lift the veil.

Manouchka Doreus

Date: 3/25/2011 8:59:00 AM

i was wrong... your particular style requires the wordplay that so often appears in your writing... it requires the reader of the poem to have achieved a certain level of understanding and is, as Mills would say, a higher pleasure