Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Limerick

The Treat

( Limerick)


Once a man was walking the street
When upon the floor noticed a treat
So he went to grab it
But a light wasn't lit
So he slipped, falling on his head 100 feet!


Dorian Petersen Potter
Aka ladydp2000
Copyright@2014


10.3.2014

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Cory Long October 5, 2014 at 5:40 PM nice job with this limerick.. I enjoyed it tonight. thank you for stopping by. have a wonderful night .

Sara Kendrick October 3, 2014 at 5:27 PM That would be a very long fall..Well, did he live?...Thanks for the visit to my page..My coffee has to be decaf sad to say but one cup or just a few sips keeps away the headache..I would share though..Sara

Tim Smith October 3, 2014 at 4:26 AM Lol....love it Dorian....hugs Tim