The Treat

( Limerick) Once a man was walking the street When upon the floor noticed a treat So he went to grab it But a light wasn't lit So he slipped, falling on his head 100 feet! Dorian Petersen Potter Aka ladydp2000 Copyright@2014 10.3.2014

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Cory Long

Date: 10/5/2014 5:40:00 PM

nice job with this limerick.. I enjoyed it tonight. thank you for stopping by. have a wonderful night .

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/3/2014 5:27:00 PM

That would be a very long fall..Well, did he live?...Thanks for the visit to my page..My coffee has to be decaf sad to say but one cup or just a few sips keeps away the headache..I would share though..Sara

Tim Smith

Date: 10/3/2014 4:26:00 AM

Lol....love it Dorian....hugs Tim