The Treat

Written: April 23, 2025, for contest sponsored by Tania Kitchen

           ************

Chocolate, cinnamon hug,
Steam ceramic mug
Creamy smiles of cozy love
Smoothy delivered
Sweetness from her lips
Ruck sweet kiss
Treat!

appreciationepulaeryu

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Linda Alice Fowler

May 5, 2025 at 7:14 AM

Love how you've delivered this form Las. Congratulations! :)

Christuraj Alex

May 5, 2025 at 6:22 AM

"Sweetness from her lips" - Romatic with the delicacy. Congratulations!

thriveni c mysore

May 4, 2025 at 11:09 PM

ambience! Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Howard Kerr

May 4, 2025 at 6:50 PM

Sotto, I’m returning to congratulate you on this uniquely imaginative and highly original piece and its appropriate placement And the romantic element enhances its charm Thanks for your kind words on my entry Howard

Sara Kendrick

May 4, 2025 at 4:10 PM

Congratulation on this winner.. Way to go. I like the romantic touch as well. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

May 4, 2025 at 1:19 PM

Creative one, Sotto. Congrats.

Paula Goldsmith

May 4, 2025 at 1:06 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "The Treat" write. Have a fun day with your win.......

Tania Kitchin

May 4, 2025 at 11:41 AM

Lassad, wonderfully sweet and creative, congratulations on your winning placement.

Sotto Poet

May 4, 2025 at 11:48 AM

Tania, thanks for hosting the contest and for my wonderful placement.

Duke Beaufort

April 27, 2025 at 6:48 AM

SP, you've made this very interesting using "ruck" to describe a kiss. Makes me think you had to do a lot of work for the reward. A kiss could very much give the feeling of a chocolate. Making me think a lot after reading a short poem. Smiles!