The Treat

Written: April 23, 2025, for contest sponsored by Tania Kitchen ************ Chocolate, cinnamon hug, Steam ceramic mug Creamy smiles of cozy love Smoothy delivered Sweetness from her lips Ruck sweet kiss Treat!

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/5/2025 7:14:00 AM

Love how you've delivered this form Las. Congratulations! :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/5/2025 6:22:00 AM

"Sweetness from her lips" - Romatic with the delicacy. Congratulations!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 5/4/2025 11:09:00 PM

ambience! Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Howard Kerr

Date: 5/4/2025 6:50:00 PM

Sotto, I’m returning to congratulate you on this uniquely imaginative and highly original piece and its appropriate placement And the romantic element enhances its charm Thanks for your kind words on my entry Howard

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/4/2025 4:10:00 PM

Congratulation on this winner.. Way to go. I like the romantic touch as well. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2025 1:19:00 PM

Creative one, Sotto. Congrats.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/4/2025 1:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "The Treat" write. Have a fun day with your win.......

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/4/2025 11:41:00 AM

Lassad, wonderfully sweet and creative, congratulations on your winning placement.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/4/2025 11:48:00 AM

Tania, thanks for hosting the contest and for my wonderful placement.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/27/2025 6:48:00 AM

SP, you've made this very interesting using "ruck" to describe a kiss. Makes me think you had to do a lot of work for the reward. A kiss could very much give the feeling of a chocolate. Making me think a lot after reading a short poem. Smiles!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/25/2025 9:38:00 AM

Love the use of “ruck” - had to look it up…delicious with a touch of romance! Fave, my friend!

Paige Hind

Date: 4/23/2025 9:23:00 PM

Sounds delicious, lol - I love warm drinks,

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2025 1:03:00 PM

- Really a treat /with sweet kiss, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs