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The Trap

**First ever attempt at a limerick. I think I got it right. There is a nasty little trap Discouragement for a sap. Victims feel no grace Only complain in space. Their heart is a heavy place.

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Date: 1/23/2023 10:54:00 AM
Meter and rhyme is good Miranda. Listen to Andrea...she knows her stuff ;)
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 1/23/2023 11:02:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/5/2023 10:42:00 AM
Hey Miranda. It's good for your first. Let me send you a soupmail.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 1/5/2023 11:48:00 AM
You send that soupmail. Glad its good for a first.

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