Miranda Hawley Poet Limerick

The Trap

**First ever attempt at a limerick.  I think I got it right.

There is a nasty little trap
Discouragement for a sap.
Victims feel no grace
Only complain in space.
Their heart is a heavy place.

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Linda Alice Fowler January 23, 2023 at 10:54 AM Meter and rhyme is good Miranda. Listen to Andrea...she knows her stuff ;) Miranda Hawley January 23, 2023 at 11:02 AM Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2023 at 10:42 AM Hey Miranda. It's good for your first. Let me send you a soupmail. Miranda Hawley January 5, 2023 at 11:48 AM You send that soupmail. Glad its good for a first.