The Transformation

~And with a kiss he introduced her spirit
		To a new world 
         The minute his lips chose her
                 She was undone
                 Reborn
                 In his bliss
                 She was transformed~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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August 20, 2018 at 2:54 PM
Powerful and sensual. Well done. Those last four lines really move you forward quickly and leave you, the reader, a bit breathless too.
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