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The Train Ride

Ruth and her six year old daughter Annie, were moving along the countryside by Train. Ruth was reminiscing. She was staring deeply into her six year old daughter's beautiful brown eyes. Ruth was feeling emotional, and had a deep sorrow filling up her worried heart. The train proceeded. She clutched her daughter close to her with a special mother daughter bond. Anne, her daughter, looked up at her, innocently and asked, "Mommy why are you so sad?" She kept repeating, until her mom answered her. Not wanting to worry her, she replied, "Honey your Mommy is not sad." The six year old intelligently asked, " Mommy then why were you crying?" Her mom replied, " I'm OK sweetheart, now relax, and hold me." Ruth was experiencing a flood of thoughts of Annie growing up as a child. She was asking Annie if she remembered the first time she told her that she loved her. Annie said, " Yes Mommy I remember." Ruth kept a special Diary of times and dates, of special moments she and Annie shared. Ruth thought of Annie's first birthday, when she took her first steps, and was falling forward as she caught her, preventing her from hurting herself. Ruth reached in her jacket and said to Annie, " Honey, always have with you this diary. Annie took the diary and started looking through it. She said, "Mommy this is so special, thank you Mommy." Annies dad was imprisoned, and it added to Ruth's turmoil inside. She was trying to ascertain his whereabouts but was difficult to do so. Annie kept reminding Ruth of her father. She constantly was asking, " Where's Daddy Mommy?" " We will be with him soon." Was her repeated reply. The train made its way through and a Loud whistle blew. It started slowing down, and just before it stopped the whistle blew again. Ruth looked at Annie and said to her, " Always remember honey your Daddy and Mommy, will always love you. Promise me you will never forget." Annie replied, " I promise Mommy to remember." As the Caboose door opened Ruth held Annie's hand. Annie asked her Mom, "Mommy where are we?" Her Mom replied, " We are going to see Daddy and Grandpa, and Grandma." Ruth was shaking inside, and the journey was finally over. The SS Nazi Guards motioned them forward, and directed them into The Auschwitz Concentration Camp. Michael Tor

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Date: 10/8/2022 4:36:00 PM
What powerful storytelling, Michael. A FAVE. Please consider breaking up into stanzas/ paragraphs.
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Date: 10/21/2022 11:47:00 PM
I will Line thanks for your thoughts...
Date: 8/3/2022 6:24:00 PM
I didn't see the ending coming, Michael but the story line had me captivated to the very end. A very sad chapter of history, perhaps one of the worst in human history and sadly, evil persists in the world and will until the end. Kudos on an excellent piece of writing. All the best, Terry
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Date: 8/4/2022 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Terry for your insightful comment, it surely is like you said a very sad chapter of History. God bless you and thanks for stopping by...
Date: 7/25/2022 3:14:00 PM
Unfortunately, I'm all too familiar with this obscene piece of history, although my immediate family came here from Russia to escape the pogroms there were also family members who opted to stay behind. I learned as a child that these relatives had been crammed into trains and taken to death camps. I am sure that there were many parents who attempted to keep their children as calm as possible to prevent them from going mad! Belated congratulations Michael Tor. Robert
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Date: 7/27/2022 10:56:00 PM
Robert I am so sorry some of your beloved family succumbed to these Hellbound Nazis. This reminder of those relatives probably hit a nerve in you. It was a tragedy of the worst kind. I am doing more research on The Third Reich. There was a German Commander who hid Many Jewish souls and fed them and risked his life in doing so, I want to right a narrative on him. Hitler and his corhorts gave the German people a sad legacy. I want to show that there were a few good Germans that cared and protected our fellow Jews. Thanks for your comment Robert and I hope the story wasn't to painful to read my friend...
Date: 7/25/2022 1:57:00 PM
This is an excellent narrative which pulls at our heart strings, Michael. One can feel emotions creeping in, and the contrast between innocence and harsh reality comes to the fore. Alas, in spite of all that the world has gone through, evil persists. ~ Congrats on p.o.t.w. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/25/2022 11:38:00 PM
Thank you Paul your words are so correct and true. you wonder when all this madness will end. Hopefully sooner than later. God bless you my friend stay healthy and keep posting your excellent poetry...
Date: 7/24/2022 4:57:00 AM
Oh Michael, this had me in tears at the end of your narrative. A sad part in our history books, but as I am commenting on this sad but superbly written narrative, atrocities world wide have almost become the order of the day. Keep writing your excellent poetry Michael, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer PS I have a spelling error in my answer to you but have not got edit, on my page at least.
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Date: 7/25/2022 3:27:00 AM
Jennifer don't not worry about your spelling error Dear we all make them even the best of us. Thank you so much for your visit your tears I hope will dry quickly. God bless you Jennifer...
Date: 7/24/2022 12:04:00 AM
Even as we speak, such horrors continue to be enacted the world over, more oft than not, leaving behind no witness to recount the depravity unleashed.
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Date: 7/25/2022 3:20:00 AM
You are right my friend it is sad these Tragedies still take place. What does that say about humanity? Thank you for your valued comment Unseeking S.
Date: 7/22/2022 8:15:00 PM
Oh my Michael….what an amazing, beautifully sad story….I never expected the ending! Lovely…..Debx
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Date: 7/22/2022 11:30:00 PM
Yes Deb, it is beautiful and sad. A mother's love she has for the child she is so afraid of losing. Worried about what will take place at their destination, and savoring every precious moment with her. I am sure this story played out with many mothers, who were in those horrific trains and boxcars headed for what History reflects as Humanities Darkest Place. Thank you Deb for stopping by. I will visit your poetry tomorrow as it is 230 am in NY now. Couldn't sleep. Have a fun, relaxing weekend, and again thank you for your comment...
Date: 7/22/2022 11:56:00 AM
You are a powerful storyteller. It takes that to keep history truly alive. Without those with pens full of blood there would be no voice of the past at all. So emotional. So real... so very heartbreaking. Prayers. Ann
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Date: 7/22/2022 4:19:00 PM
Thank you Ann. Your words are so appreciated. Yes we must remember the past so we don't repeat it. God bless you and thank you for your visit...
Date: 7/21/2022 2:52:00 PM
Michael, this is chilling and heartbreaking when we remember that it was a tragic reality for countless people. We must never forget. But you have told this tale with such compassion that we are reminded that love is the real story. Evil is an intruder that must be battled and fought off, and we must all do what we can to prevent those circumstances from being repeated. Have you ever seen the film "Life Is Beautiful"? I was reminded of that powerful message. Congrats for your POTW, my friend.
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Date: 7/21/2022 6:51:00 PM
John I love your insightfulness. Love, is the real story, and evil is the intruder. I Totally agree. I have not seen the film John, but now you have inspired me to do so. It is hard to believe that Human beings can be so callous as to commit such a crime against humanity. As you know John, the sad part is that History is repeating itself with Putin. He is the modern day Tyrannical Hitler. I wish I could do something to stop this Atrocity from continuing. Thank you for your visit John, your comment is dearly appreciated. God bless you, and I will check out the movie you shared with me...
Date: 7/21/2022 12:54:00 PM
Hi Michael, this is such an honest and sad write, well deserving of POTW honours. Your narrative flows sadly to the conclusion I was waiting for. This is something that should never be forgotten. Your words touch the heart with a tender sadness that I always feel when thinking of this period. How human's could do such things to fellow feelings. Sometimes I think it has never ended, the hatred of people for people. Congratulations once more on a touching narrative ..... Mike.
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Date: 7/21/2022 2:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Vladislay. your assesment is one that I totally agree with. I agree such a tragedy lives forever in peoples hearts and minds, and like you say my friend has never ended. It lives in us because we are so shocked to know that precious souls experienced this evil event. It is hard to fathom Vladislay that this happened. and that there are Madman that can do this to decent human beings. Your thoughts are appreciated and may the good Lord bless you today for your caring heart...
Date: 7/21/2022 10:02:00 AM
I had a feeling that they were going to a camp. If you had put details about how awful the ride was, it would have assured me I guessed right, but when I got to the end, I was not surprised. This is a very touching story, and one of your best poetic endeavors, Michael. I see many people have appreciated this story that you told. It's fresh in MY mind because I had just entered a contest using my own concentration camp story!!
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Date: 7/21/2022 2:49:00 PM
I will have to read your story Andrea. Thank you Andrea for your kind words. It is a touching story and one that I am sure took place many times over and over as families were thinking on those train rides where they were going to end up with these madmen in control. Such a dark time in History Andrea. I pray we would never go through this tribulation again. Unfortunately Putin is putting the Ukranian people through another act of terror. So sad for this world right now Andrea with these Tyrants destroying mankind. God bless you hope you are well and thank you for your visit...
Date: 7/20/2022 12:42:00 PM
Thank you Poetry Soup for such an Honor. God bless all of you for all you do for us, and how you run this Wonderful site, that I am so glad to be a part of.
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Date: 7/20/2022 8:38:00 AM
Back with big congratulations on POTW! Your compelling narrative stays on my mind! Never forget. Warmest wishes Michael Tor
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Date: 7/20/2022 12:44:00 PM
Thank you Anaya for your kind words. I know it was difficult for you to finish reading. You have a tender heart for people. God bless you and thank you so much for stopping by...
Date: 7/19/2022 6:36:00 AM
Back with big congratulations on your well-deserved POTW. Blessings and regards.
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Date: 7/19/2022 1:56:00 PM
Thank you Laasad for your Compliment. It iw well appreciated my friend. God bless you...
Date: 7/19/2022 5:02:00 AM
BIG congrats on POTW, Michael. Your story takes the reader back to those days of inhumanity and crimes--highly emotive write that tugs the heart. You do a great service by reminding us about the world that was and again could be if we don't respond quickly to atrocities. Kudos for your powerful poem.
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Date: 7/19/2022 1:53:00 PM
Hi Vijay. Your words ring much truth in them. Thank you for your much appreciated comment. I agree with your sentiments my friend. Yes Vijay sometimes we need a reminder to help us not forget. This reminder helps us be smarter in looking for signs to avoid in order to not repeat history again. Unfortunately there is only so much you can do. Look at the Russian Ukraine conflict , we have no control over it, and we are just Pawns watching them do as they will. Sad day for humanity. God bless you and thank you for your elightening comment...
Date: 7/19/2022 3:19:00 AM
Michael can you check out senator dick Black Ex US colonel.?
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Date: 7/19/2022 1:48:00 PM
Yes Joe I will look into it. First time I have heard of this Colonel.
Date: 7/18/2022 10:53:00 PM
Auschwitz always leaves a flood of soulful emotions in everyone....! What all sad tales that fateful place has to recount ! How many thousands of people were wrecked inside the concentrtion camps. The train taking them would be halting at a point where the passengers would be led to a nether world to be subjected to endless torture and finally to death. The mother and child in the train will remain alive in our minds leaving painful memories behind. A very touching narration Michael !
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Date: 7/19/2022 1:47:00 AM
They all have power given to them by trusting people that don't question their motives. I see it happening with the Russian people, unfortunately they don't have a choice under communism. They are these tyrannical dictators that take over because people let them. that is why we have to question everything that is happening and hold our Leaders accountable for their actions, because if we don't , history will repeat itself. God bless you Valsa and thank you for your valued comment...
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Date: 7/19/2022 1:33:00 AM
Yes Valsa a touching Narration that was sad to write, thinking of the many families, and innocent children that were put to death. It really happened is the realization of it. There are evil people in this world Valsa, they are all around us, and we don't know it. Look at Putin and what he is doing to those poor Souls in Ukraine. It never ends it seems like. When I think of the research I have done all my life on these types of people.
Date: 7/18/2022 6:43:00 PM
This story is so sad and heart breaking, when I think of all those innocent lives lost, it makes me weep. Nicely penned, thank you for sharing Michael.
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Date: 7/18/2022 7:41:00 PM
Vie your words touch me. Your sentiment toward those families is heartfelt. Humanities darkest hour. It is unbelievable that there are still Tyrants out there orchestrating this same tragedy among the helpless souls. Putin is such a Monster unleashing bombs on the people of Ukraine. Instead of consentration camps he is using bombs instead. History is repeating itself again. This saddens me deeply. May the good Lord Jesus bless you for your caring Heart Vie...
Date: 7/18/2022 6:42:00 AM
LEST WE FORGET.....beautifully written Michael. An horrific recounting of love in the midst of hate.
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Date: 7/18/2022 7:38:00 AM
Hi John, your words say it all my friend. Thank you for your comment John, it is one that I appreciate, and value. Hope you are well, and thank you again for stopping by...
Date: 7/18/2022 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW! You have penned a remarkable and moving account for many. It is chilling to think about the atrocities that were committed and the horror of each person/family of having to accept the reality of what was to come. Your well penned write reminds us of a history that cannot be denied. Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 7/18/2022 7:35:00 AM
Hi Paulette, your words are so true. Thank you for the Congratulations. It is chilling and unbelievable that these Monsters could have commited such heinous crimes against humanity. When will we learn not to repeat the past. God bless you Paulette it is always a pleasure to hear from you...
Date: 7/18/2022 12:21:00 AM
Congratulations Michael on poem of the week with this awesome write. I also thought the story would end with a suicide. One can’t imagine the horror those poor people had to face knowing what would be their fate. Well done… Belle
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Date: 7/18/2022 3:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Belle for your humbling comment. I agree it is hard to imagine what they went through. Such a sad time in History. Evil as evil can get, thank God it is over. God bless you Belle and again I appreciate your valued comment...
Date: 7/17/2022 9:47:00 PM
Wow... amazing, Michael, enjoyed reading
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Date: 7/18/2022 3:47:00 AM
Hi Eve. How are you Dear? Thank you for stopping by and sharing your comment. I will stop over and see your latest Poetry. You are one of my favorite writers here on the Soup. God bless you and thank you again for your appreciated comment...
Date: 7/17/2022 5:24:00 PM
This is tender, emotional and heartbreaking, all at the same time. Your thoughts curl softly around me. Congratulations Michael, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 7/17/2022 6:04:00 PM
Thank you Brandy for your thoughtful message. It is emotional and heartbreaking to know this really took place. Thanks for taking time out of your weekend to comment Brandy, may the good Lord bless you...
Date: 7/17/2022 4:07:00 PM
Michael, your poignant story has such veracity behind it and we must never forget and repeat the past atrocities. Congratulations on your deserving Poem of the Week honor. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/17/2022 6:01:00 PM
Hi Connie. Your picture always brings me a heartfelt feeling inside. You are so vibrant in that photograph. I see an Aura of love emanating from your photo. I hope and pray you are healed and have energy, and much joy my Dear. Yes it is a story that many unfortunately went through in this Madman's concentration camp. Gershon made a comment below that really solidified the Reality of it. Sadly this event is repeating itself with Putin, only he is using bombs instead of Concentration Camps. Thank you for taking the time out of your weekend to send me this much appreciated comment Connie. God bless you for it...
Date: 7/17/2022 3:08:00 PM
Oh poem of the week Michael congratulations.' On this write; that is not for the weak 'However of constitution or of mind' I did a reply to your earlier mail to me Hopefully good can be achieved if we Stay strong.' I only wish for positivity.'
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Date: 7/17/2022 3:34:00 PM
Joe thanks again for your comment. Yes Joe I also wish for Positivity. So much going on in this world today. It will be a miracle if this war does not escalate to be the final war of all wars. My lifetime of research tells me this might be the final one but I pray I am wrong in this assessment of Putin's war. I say this Joe because of the many signs given in Revelation, also look at how all these evil agendas that they are trying to force on us. Jesus is coming soon my friend I can't tell you when but you can see it all around you and feel it too. God bless you Joe...
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