The Train

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In memory of the romance of a lost era. 

Here I rest, a rusting hulk
Alone, aloof, within my bulk
The hiss of steam within my veins
The pistons pulling at the reins
Mere memories now of a loyal life
Now round my rivets rust is rife
No clank of coal, no whistle shout
No churning wheels, no water spout
Now rust flakes fast to line my grave
Where only leaves and litter pave
This epitaph to a faithful slave
And don't deny I served you well
Yet now condemned within my cell
Of rusted rails that bind me fast
Those guiding hands of days long past
When smells of grease and hissing steam
Echoed gleams and children's screams
As stones and steel rushed past my head
Now tears of rain make up this bed
A burial cloak for a servant laid
To rest and rust in romance dead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/24/2025 3:22:00 AM
This is a great poem. I find it bucolic - like the diary of a quiet and keen observer in the serene plains of North America. Beautiful.
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Date: 8/20/2025 11:37:00 AM
Hello Radical Rooney, this is an excellent write and an enjoyable read. Loved hearing the clanking sound when you closed the doors. Have a wonderful day.
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Radical Rooney
Date: 8/20/2025 2:07:00 PM
Thanks so much
Date: 8/20/2025 1:57:00 AM
Absolutely awesome imagery my friend, great rhyme and meter. Loved it thoroughly. God bless you.
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Date: 8/20/2025 2:07:00 PM
Many thanks much appreciated
Date: 8/19/2025 1:20:00 PM
Excellent imagery—what a pleasure to read a true poem. A work of rhyming verse that carries genuine emotion, rather than prose merely masquerading as poetry.
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Radical Rooney
Date: 8/20/2025 7:36:00 AM
Thanks so much !
Date: 5/6/2016 7:31:00 PM
WOW, I love it, I am a train girl this speaks to me. I'm faving this! :)
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Radical Rooney
Date: 8/20/2025 7:37:00 AM
Thanks so much !
Date: 5/6/2016 9:14:00 AM
Like the imagery
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Radical Rooney
Date: 8/20/2025 7:39:00 AM
Many thanks
Date: 1/30/2016 8:03:00 PM
Hi Radical Rooney, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 8/20/2025 7:38:00 AM
Thanks so much Skat
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Radical Rooney
Date: 5/8/2016 9:03:00 AM
HI SKAT LOVE YOUR WORK THANKS FOR COMMENTS RAD
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