The Tracks of Forlorn

The Tracks of Forlorn

The gravel is new, freshly laid,
The boundaries bordered by fences we've made,
Walking along in my tarseled feet,
In the dark of the night and midsummer's heat,

I look at the tracks and feel the horn,
The world at my back and all of their scorn.
The train passes by on ridges of steel,
Shaking the ground and all I feel.

It rolls along as the ground surely shakes,
The peace is shattered as my mind itself quakes.
Stress of the mind feels like torrents of sin,
As the wind rushes by pushed from the lead engine.

Memories flash by as trains eat up steel,
Running through mind like an old movie reel.
I've lived and I've loved, but memories are torn,
Like the train of my mind on tracks of forlorn.

I've stood and I've felt,
Pondering now the cards I'd been dealt,
In the dead of the night and train's aftermath,
The silence is deaf'ning on the cold gravel path.

-Debra
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith  Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 10:50 PM
standing at a point in life where past experiences, regrets, and emotional strain rush through the mind uncontrollably—like a train—leaving the speaker to confront what remains in the silence afterward 🕊️
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August 1, 2026 at 1:59 AM
I love how you write! Your thoughts are so elegantly expressed!
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