The touch of her soft flowing hair

I don’t think she’s really aware
That the touch of her soft flowing hair
Takes me drifting through time
To that evening at nine
When she stole my heart without care

I had just held the door
Nothing less – nothing more
A flash of eyes blue
A whispered “thank you”
Made me wish to perform an encore

The hook had been set
Though she wasn’t fishing
I sat alone at the bar
Silently wishing
She’d said just a little bit more

Thus, fate intervened
As we left in the rain
Draped beneath our old coats
Leaping o’er curbside moats
Setting sail on an endless affair

All our secrets abide
Even those that we “hide”
In those quizzical grins
That mask all or our sins
‘neath the touch of her soft flowing hair
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Willason Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 4:44 AM
Ah we become fully alive in such moments, fill the resevoir of memory to feed us for a lifetime as this poem attests. A classic John...thanks for sharing.
Tor Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 8:06 AM
A surreal moment you've shared John. One of excitement, and of a great ending. Your truth evokes a thrilling, secretive, passion of sinful nature, once upon a time...
Vaso Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 8:38 PM
Very romantic, loved this gem.
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January 7, 2025 at 2:01 PM
Very romantic John, simply divine… Beryl
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