' the Touch of a Virgin ... '

Her Touch Was Shyly-Light
Full of Purity, In His Sight
Her Touch Was Soft in Timidity
Almost Opposed To His Temerity

Almost As If She Were Afraid To Lay
Naked and Exposed, as Helpless-Prey
Untouched and Untutored In Torrid-Ways
His Eyes, Seemed To Say … It’s Ok …

So, The Touch of The Virgin, Did Fall
Her Fingertips, Fragile and Small
Upon Broad Shoulders and Over All
Gaining-Ground, with Each, Moist-Kiss-Call

 … On His Lips, His Eyes, All Over His Face
From Toes, To Thighs, and Back Up, To Waist
Around His Torso, Sent Shivers Up His Back
Covered Every Inch, of His Manly-Track …

In An Instant … It Was All Over
Beneath Blanket, She Was Now ... Lover
By Honeyed-Moon, They Did Glisten and Glow
After The First Touch of ... Virgin Snow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freakasso Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 12:08 AM
Beautiful and adrenalin charging,groin tearing write MoonBee,This poem really describes;the virgins clarion call.Off course thank U for your lovely comments,one of the best by any poet yet.Your lovely words like Wildebeest herds in droves they gently beckon,this poet here can smell you near,which means you're a lot to reckon.God Bless,PRINCE PS.You mentioned you were a long distance runner.Which distance and at what level?
Scripca Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 11:03 PM
Beautiful making Love Story. One feels alive when reading this wonderful poem. Congratulations! Love, Iolanda
Pickett Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 11:02 AM
"Virgin Snow" WOW, nice word-play......:JP]
Freeman Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 7:19 PM
Romantic and passionate, Whew! Sincerely, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 5:12 PM
Very passionate write. Keep writing. Sara
Segal Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 1:29 PM
Lovely poem,I love lover by honeyed-moon! love Simone
Sheart Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 12:58 PM
Awesome write dear Moon Bee! A joy to read, Keep writing and I'll keep reading, smile. Have a wonderful day. Love Light Patty
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