The Total Disjoint

With a plastic and stainless steel joint
Which was his very authentic point
A Viagra pill, he!
The ******** up_glee
Then a plastic and stainless disjoint
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Omaidin Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 3:15 AM
Excellent win, congratulations, Déirdre
Loving Iii Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 6:55 AM
your hororifying me. john
Keogh Jr. Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Good job in more ways than one. So is the bionic best or the automaton orgasm? Your choice. Nice original stainless steel take on the subject. Shine on harvest swoon. Regards and thank you from Gerard.
Brown Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 12:18 PM
I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments Sara. You made my day with this Limerick. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol
Calhoun Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 9:36 AM
LOL! Fun limerick. Good luck in the contest. KC
Onclaud Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 4:55 PM
total viagramic delight that tickles my funny bones, sara... lol! love it.. winning wishes in the contest..:) huggs, nette
Mehta Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 3:43 PM
Very funny, humor and hilarious write using viagram, Sara.. hahahaha
Omaidin Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 2:23 PM
Even bolder than mine, very funny Déirdre Ó Maidín
Goff Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 2:10 PM
I agree....I deleted it....
Campi Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 12:37 PM
Hi Sara, I smiled some when I read this. THe things men try amazes me. I am an older guy, but the wife and I are very happy. Take care, Jancarl
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