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The Tornado

destruction lies in its wake matchbox houses whirled about we huddle in our bathtub and wait for the train

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/28/2012 5:16:00 AM
yeah,very scary.Clear in four lines
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Date: 6/27/2012 8:19:00 PM
Scary situation. Wonderful tanka. I really like your last line. Great work. Love, Kim
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Date: 6/27/2012 3:50:00 PM
An ominous picture you have penned. Peace and blessings.
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