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The Toolbox I chasten my tool box of woe It harbored my imperfections Screwdriver tighten my morals Garden shear for tougher measures Wrench that will grasp goodness within Hammer to smash my wrongdoings Scissors cut away my failures Pliers to hold my character Lock my virtuous surrender Key my consent for it to be. 2020 May 16

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/16/2019 8:53:00 PM

This is so creative and imaginative---but grounded in reality. Good to see something like a toolbox featured in a poem. The Soup can use a dose, or at least a dash, of masculinity, methinks. (I know; I know. Women can handle tools just as well as men can. Yadda-yedda...) Here's to us guys for a change. ~ gw

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/16/2019 9:11:00 PM

A bit of true blueness after a trip of the ethereal world, 'tis balanced Gershon, Aloha wk

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/16/2019 1:18:00 PM

A talented, creative, clever write my friend - all the best, Hugs, Jennifer.

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/16/2019 9:07:00 PM

Appreciate your valued input as always Jennifer, Aloha wk

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/16/2019 10:37:00 AM

Clever and original! :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/16/2019 11:24:00 AM

Thank you Maureen, Aloha wk

Jack Horne

Date: 5/16/2019 7:21:00 AM

ha ha, love this clever poem with some excellent metaphors

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/16/2019 7:56:00 AM

Appreciate it Jack, Aloha wk

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/16/2019 6:34:00 AM

I wanted to say Connie's words but EXACTLY as Connie said them, so please read her comment again, and give me half-credit for my mind cannot think of anything better. Thank you Connie! And thank you William. This one is terrific!

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/16/2019 6:51:00 AM

Oops--spoke too soon, can't halfsies me done read the comment thereafter, thanks Caren, Aloha wk

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/16/2019 4:48:00 AM

I love this unique poem that contains some wonderful metaphors William. The shape you have given it makes it impressive too! Have a great day! : )

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/16/2019 6:48:00 AM

Thanks Connie and you as well of a day too! Aloha wk