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The Toffee Maker

A poem l wrote after reading about the Toffee Maker in Cider with Rosie by Laurie Lee. The Toffee Maker Lonely forlorn the spinster be spirit broken, fell to her knee she prayed to God for companion true the Blacksmith listened, and then he knew. 'Please send me a man' he heard her say for passion did float upon his way for in the belfry he chanced to hear the lonely spinster's pain and fear. So off he ran to look his best his Sunday suit for her he dressed 'so marry ME' the Blacksmith said 'companion be and surely blessed'. So to this day the stories told two lonely hearts from book of old A spinsters plea in church had led The Blacksmith heard, and contented wed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/14/2017 10:29:00 PM
Nice poem.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 10/15/2017 4:31:00 AM
Thank you Harshita, that's very kind of you. Have a lovely day, take care, Jackie.
Date: 8/6/2017 7:38:00 PM
what a charming poem Jackie ... and they all lived happily ever after i hope:-) hugs jan xx
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 10/15/2017 4:29:00 AM
Thank you Jan for comment. sorry for my delay in reply, I'm still so busy sorting process of house move.Its taken over everything and need to get back to my reading others poems on here that l love to do much. take care.xx
Date: 7/20/2017 10:27:00 AM
yay that is a very happy out come it reads so well brilliant really love you poems my friend
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/20/2017 10:46:00 AM
thank you Julie for your kind comments. lm so glad you enjoy my poems..l really love writing them.take care. Jackie.
Date: 7/19/2017 1:47:00 PM
You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 10/15/2017 4:24:00 AM
Many thanks for your comment.lm so sorry in my delay in reply as been in process of moving house. take care.Jackie
Date: 7/9/2017 8:08:00 AM
Love this, Jackie! I will have to look in on your inspiration!
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/9/2017 9:50:00 AM
many thanks Kim for your comment. Take care. Jackie

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