The Tip of My Pinky Is Just Fine, Thank You

For my friend, Bea, who makes me smile and is the brightest star in the bunch.



The tip of my pinky is just fine, thank you.

My bosom’s low.
My gait is slow.

I can’t scurry,
but what’s the hurry?

My foot gets sore
when it touches the floor.

My nose is runny.
I have pain in my tummy.

BUT

My pinky’s still pink
at its very tip.

My cataracts removed.
My eyesight’s improved.

I grew a new lump thing.
Still my heart is pumping.

Amidst all these things,
I sing sweet ting-a-lings.

Always I snatch dem golden rings
hanging so shiny from shimmering strings

Kathryn McLoughlin Collins
February 12, 2014

Bea is 93.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/23/2014 8:53:00 AM
I like it, I get the reality and the humor of it all.
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 3/23/2014 5:11:00 PM
The bit about the pinky is true. She didn't say the other things but IS all of them.
Date: 3/10/2014 2:08:00 PM
'...sing sweet ting-a-lings,' '...hanging so shiny from shimmering strings,' lovely phrasing! The woes and the wonders of aging gracefully. Well done Kathy! Love, Keith xoxo
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 3/14/2014 8:48:00 AM
She is the epitome of grace and humor and kindness and intelligence. Thanks Keith. (I am so happy your are back) love, Kathy
Date: 2/20/2014 6:49:00 AM
Hilarious!! - Wish I could meet Bea...Bet she's a real kick in the pants and I know YOU are...
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 2/20/2014 6:56:00 AM
Thanks Tim. Bea is truly one in a million. I hope you are doing okay. love, Kathy
Date: 2/16/2014 8:06:00 AM
A sheer delight to read as always , Thanks for sharing .
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 2/16/2014 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Daz.. Bea is the true delight here. Kathy
Date: 2/15/2014 6:28:00 PM
Dear Kathy... At 93, I doubt if my pinky will still be pink... or if I'll be able to use it to count my cute little piggies... ;-)... anyway, the poem is cute, and that's what counts... Love, Terry
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Date: 2/16/2014 9:04:00 AM
you're right - it will probably be all callousy and yellow.
Date: 2/13/2014 6:54:00 PM
YEAH I still got a lot of good parts too![are you snowed in? I am :(] Light & Love
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 2/14/2014 12:13:00 PM
blue sky and fluffy clouds now. I'm going to check the roads before it snows again.
Date: 2/12/2014 6:57:00 PM
ha! i got a kick out of this poem, kathryn, and i hope that bea did, too!
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 2/14/2014 12:14:00 PM
Okay - so here's a question. What's the matter with Bill deBlasio and his crew?
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