Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Limerick

The Tin Man Of Oz

That wicked old witch made me the Tin Man

   Sans a heart, I'm like a rusty tin can

      I creak like a screechy hinge

         Making my many friends cringe

            A spritz of oil keeps me going again

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Charles Messina December 14, 2024 at 12:14 PM Hello Bob, Great limerick you've written. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. It's great to see you are still writing! Keep that precious pen flowing. Merry Christmas to you and your family. All the very best...Charlie

Gershon Wolf November 20, 2024 at 10:11 PM Some say 'Keep on Trucking.' We say, Keep on Spritzing!' ~ O.L. Baron