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3/18/2026 for Dealing in Time Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May

The Time of Youth and Age

Young man, you are rich with time -
you have a whole life ahead.  
Young man, how I wish it were mine,
and I had your riches instead. 

So, won't you, on this fine Spring Day, 
spend a little of your time on me?
I don't take cash.  I will take it as pay
if you tell me of being young and free.

Old man, you have the whole day, 
you are surely rich with time.
Work and school have taken mine away. 
How I wish your time was mine -

and with that, the young man swiftly left,
and that ended their debate. 
Both of those fellows were feeling bereft -
with currencies exchanged at a different rate.
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Goldsmith Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 9:20 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write    again. Have a blessed day with your win..............
Crandall Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 4:59 PM
Thanks, Paula!
May Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 7:19 AM
Nicely penned, Congrats on your win
Crandall Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 4:58 PM
Thanks - it was an interesting contest to think about!
Jones Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 11:45 PM
Very clever David and deserving of a win! Congratulations on your!
Crandall Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 4:59 PM
Thanks, Karen!
Crandall Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 4:58 PM
Thanks, Karen!
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 4:37 PM
Hey. Congrats. I really enjoyed your take on this theme
Crandall Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 4:40 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 4:02 PM
Wow. You went deep with this. Much better than how I did mine, yet unposted
Crandall Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 2:02 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 12:46 PM
What a creative/fun write you have here with your "The Time of Youth and Age" write. Love your line, "How I wish I had your time -." I also wish I had more time. "Good Luck" I did, "Time Tell Me Your Story." Have a very fun day writing away.........
Crandall Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 3:57 PM
Thanks, Paula!
Bauer Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 11:33 AM
a very clever take on aging, david! well done...
Crandall Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 3:57 PM
Thanks, Ilene!
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