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The forward-pointing fight of jolly time overflies. And today blurs into a missing yesterday reprise. The present blossom has dwindled and faded away, Into a meager light reminiscence of yesterday. Wildwood snuggles, haystacks of sparkles, yesterday struggles, tomorrow marvels It's sobering to discover a shattered soul in ruin. The rage of this life was my deep eternal bane. Heroic hearts provide a sense of timelessness. Only to be misled after restoring to endlessness. Wildwood snuggles, haystacks of sparkles, yesterday struggles, tomorrow marvels Unbeknown to the utterly ecstatic child. On bestow, eternality on previous days riled. He abused the promises devoted to himself that day. As a result, auld enough, therefore a relentless journey. A young sparrow meets a growing north wind. His ambitions don't adapt to the pride designed. And a terrible yet enlightening event arose. Men envy the sunbird on the sky, tells the prose. Wildwood snuggles, Haystacks of sparkles, yesterday struggles, Tomorrow marvels.
Written: November 29, 2021 1st Place contest winner. ''Y'' Contest, New Poems - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 12/23/2021 2:27:00 AM
Great. Love it!
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Date: 12/10/2021 5:13:00 PM
Lasaad, wonderful writing and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "Y" Contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 12/10/2021 5:40:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading, placing, and commenting, dear Constance. With peace and love
Date: 12/6/2021 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write and picture. Have a blessed day/week.................
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Date: 12/3/2021 5:26:00 AM
Refrain: Wildwood snuggles, haystacks of sparkles, yesterday struggles, tomorrow marvels.....Sounds wonderful...Delice
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Date: 11/30/2021 10:01:00 AM
Beautiful expressions abound in this glorious poem, but I especially loved the first verse. This is in my faves. :)
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Date: 11/30/2021 8:35:00 AM
When I look back on yesterday there is much I would have done differently if I had but known the outcome. However with God all things work for good to them that trust in The Lord. A fine write my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/30/2021 5:35:00 AM
I like the tenor of repeating lines, Lasaad. Your thoughts resonate in days of yore.
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Date: 11/30/2021 3:00:00 AM
Great imagery and I loved the refrain.
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Date: 11/30/2021 2:00:00 AM
A glorious uplifting poem that makes one's heart sing, my friend, Lasaad! Much enjoyed! Blessing!
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