Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Limerick

The Thrill's Not Gone

Old Don Jon yearned for a last fling
and found out he still had the sting,
With the magic blue pill
and ready for the kill
He now knew will last beyond spring.


~02/19/16
~Limerick Contest II by JAN ALLISON.

(Inspired by "The Thrill was Gone" by Barbara Gorelick)

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Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 12:15 AM Abdul, Congrats on your limerick win. Luv ~LINDA~

Susan Gentry March 6, 2016 at 8:34 PM :) Congratulations on your win with this limerick!

Eve Roper March 6, 2016 at 8:30 PM haha... nice write, Abdul, congratulations on your limerick win a 7 :) Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2016 at 7:35 PM Congrats for your win, Abdul.

Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 6:33 PM clever limerick Abdul congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Daniel Turner February 19, 2016 at 3:26 PM Great limerick. Very funny. Good luck and Peace. Abdul Malik Mandani February 19, 2016 at 3:43 PM Thanks Daniel.