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The Thrills

My immortal soul I asked:

" Why have you chosen to incarcerate yourself within the walls of perishable flesh?"

" ...for to witness the thrills of temporarily.." was her surprising reply!






© Demetrios Trifiatis
   17 February 2018

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Sunlite Wanter Date: 2/17/2018 6:42:00 PM Your lines are so deep! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/17/2018 6:43:00 PM How nice of you to visit and comment in such a lovely way dear, S.W.! Thank you!

Silent One Date: 2/17/2018 11:59:00 AM Some interesting comments on your poem Demetrios... This is deep personification, well expressed.. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/17/2018 6:42:00 PM Thank you my dear friend, S.O.! Very kind of you!

Susan Ashley Date: 2/17/2018 9:43:00 AM Wow! Demetrios, such a deep, creative and awesome write. Such a stirring question and such a dramatic and dynamic response that speaks volumes. A joy to ponder the multi-faceted nuances of your superb poem this morning. Brilliant!! Warmest wishes. ~Susan Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/17/2018 10:21:00 AM Great comment that humbles my little poem dear, Susan! Thank you my friend!

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/17/2018 7:22:00 AM The body dies but not the soul, how short our time is in the big scheme of things. We should all enjoy the 'thrill' of what our creator has given us I believe the soul lives on , but where? Tom Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/17/2018 10:20:00 AM Tom, my friend, thank you so much for visiting!

Maria Williams Date: 2/17/2018 6:45:00 AM A very good question and a very true answer all encapsulated in your wonderful personification my dearest Demetrios. Indeed our souls never dies and comes down again and again to experience, re-train and learn what we have missed out on in our past lives till the ultimate learning is reached. Maria xxx Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/17/2018 10:20:00 AM How wonderful to see you dearest, Maria! Thank you for your lovely visit and comment! xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/17/2018 6:22:00 AM - A good answer - Excellent written, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/17/2018 6:29:00 AM Thank you my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Iam happy you liked it! Thank you! Hugs xxx

Vijay Pandit Date: 2/17/2018 6:18:00 AM Those thrills are mortal..well said my friend, Demetrios. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/17/2018 6:28:00 AM Yes, they are! Imagine the immortal to "live" temporally: What a thrill! Thank you for you kind visit and comment my friend, Vijay!