The Thrills

My immortal soul I asked:

" Why have you chosen to incarcerate yourself within the walls of perishable flesh?"

" ...for to witness the thrills of temporarily.." was her surprising reply!






© Demetrios Trifiatis
   17 February 2018

desirelifepersonification

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Sunlite Wanter

February 17, 2018 at 6:42 PM

Your lines are so deep!

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 17, 2018 at 6:43 PM

How nice of you to visit and comment in such a lovely way dear, S.W.! Thank you!

Silent One

February 17, 2018 at 11:59 AM

Some interesting comments on your poem Demetrios... This is deep personification, well expressed..

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 17, 2018 at 6:42 PM

Thank you my dear friend, S.O.! Very kind of you!

Susan Ashley

February 17, 2018 at 9:43 AM

Wow! Demetrios, such a deep, creative and awesome write. Such a stirring question and such a dramatic and dynamic response that speaks volumes. A joy to ponder the multi-faceted nuances of your superb poem this morning. Brilliant!! Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 17, 2018 at 10:21 AM

Great comment that humbles my little poem dear, Susan! Thank you my friend!

Tom Cunningham

February 17, 2018 at 7:22 AM

The body dies but not the soul, how short our time is in the big scheme of things. We should all enjoy the 'thrill' of what our creator has given us I believe the soul lives on , but where? Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 17, 2018 at 10:20 AM

Tom, my friend, thank you so much for visiting!

Maria Williams

February 17, 2018 at 6:45 AM

A very good question and a very true answer all encapsulated in your wonderful personification my dearest Demetrios. Indeed our souls never dies and comes down again and again to experience, re-train and learn what we have missed out on in our past lives till the ultimate learning is reached. Maria xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 17, 2018 at 10:20 AM

How wonderful to see you dearest, Maria! Thank you for your lovely visit and comment! xxx