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The Thrift Store

The Thrift Store The thrift store holds relics of time, Wondering what lives were lived in the shirts left behind. A red dress dances on a hanger, Wondering who danced in the dress before. Who gave it life? Did it start with a night on the town? To only end with a lonely night in bed. The stain on the sweatshirt, A beloved sweatshirt with the strings coming undone, unraveling, no longer useful, abandoned, by an owner who once knew how to love. A suspect stain on a white wedding dress. A faded brown stain that may have been a bright red, faded by many washes of bleach. To hide the lies of a day better left to forget. relics that face the chance of a new owner to live in it, to breathe life back into the lifeless. To dance the dance of life one more time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/15/2016 11:22:00 PM
Jessica, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/13/2016 3:26:00 PM
Very good Jessica,,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/13/2016 1:49:00 PM
You did well for your first post.I shop sometomes at a Thrift Shop.Last time I was there I bought a light green jacket in goood condition.You did well withthis poem.
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Date: 9/13/2016 11:46:00 AM
I had expected a light poem, rather predictable. But you delivered something new and startling. I love the grit to this piece and its subtle ache. Good choice for a first post. Keep them coming. The readers will follow! And welcome to soup!
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