The Thoughts of a Suicidal Heart Two

The Thoughts of a Suicidal Heart Two
By: Aidan Gilbert

God your my favorite piece of a shattered dream
In the darkness your the black shinning beam
Holding you so close, nothing made sense to me 
Your a dead hope of something that could set me free
God let me cry!
God let me die
Your empty love holds on too strong to my empty soul
At the shore a tiny hole
Lay at rest all joy I know
Do I kill myself now?
God I never figured out how 
Falling rain
Suicidal heart never tame
Death is all that is sane
Do I kill myself now?
Holding onto love is to hard somehow
God goodbye...
Sorry my empty life couldn't even be a sad excuse for a lie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/18/2015 4:03:00 PM
A sad recording. God would no won't a "goodbye" but for you to do what He put you down here for and give him glory. I agree with Catie that "living out a lifetime is a responsibility" we owe God, mankind, fellowmen, caring for lower creatures and the earth as well as being ourselves in an orderly manner. However, the poem expressed your thoughts and emotions well. Cheers.
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Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/19/2015 11:44:00 AM
God is doing such amazing things i my life and it felt a little weird writing this. Anyways thanks for the encouragement
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