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The Thoughts of a Suicidal Heart Two

The Thoughts of a Suicidal Heart Two By: Aidan Gilbert God your my favorite piece of a shattered dream In the darkness your the black shinning beam Holding you so close, nothing made sense to me Your a dead hope of something that could set me free God let me cry! God let me die Your empty love holds on too strong to my empty soul At the shore a tiny hole Lay at rest all joy I know Do I kill myself now? God I never figured out how Falling rain Suicidal heart never tame Death is all that is sane Do I kill myself now? Holding onto love is to hard somehow God goodbye... Sorry my empty life couldn't even be a sad excuse for a lie

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Rainbow Promise

Date: 7/18/2015 4:03:00 PM

A sad recording. God would no won't a "goodbye" but for you to do what He put you down here for and give him glory. I agree with Catie that "living out a lifetime is a responsibility" we owe God, mankind, fellowmen, caring for lower creatures and the earth as well as being ourselves in an orderly manner. However, the poem expressed your thoughts and emotions well. Cheers.

Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/19/2015 11:44:00 AM

God is doing such amazing things i my life and it felt a little weird writing this. Anyways thanks for the encouragement