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The thought of You

The thought of you
The thought of you is the salty sea breeze
The thought of you is a fallen flower floating on the ocean’s surface
The thought of you is the ocean, too vast to know everything
The thought of you is world changing, groundbreaking, and too good to be true

The sight of you is an emerald sparkling in the sun
The sight of you is an autumn leaf falling and spiraling to the ground
The sight of you is my universe forming
The sight of you is world changing, groundbreaking, and too good to be true

The presence of you is a sunflower budding
The presence of you is a clear sky on a warm summer day
The presence of you is the stars in the midnight blue sky
The presence of you is world changing, groundbreaking, and too good to be true. 

The thought of you, the sight of you, the presence of you is more than words could be.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/18/2025 9:10:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

JuliaJewls Jewls
Date: 3/18/2025 9:17:00 PM

Thank you so much, Beata. I love that verse too, I hope you are blessed too :)!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/17/2025 6:14:00 AM

What a lovely first offering to the soup. Welcome to the community.

JuliaJewls Jewls
Date: 3/17/2025 8:29:00 AM

Thank you for the kind words :)